Crazy_poor_dragon

I always liked the story🥰, like all the stories written by “Senpai,” but this time I did not like the hero’s🙂 character and I don’t know why?🤔?🤔? I feel that he is not a new badass 😔like the previous heroes from your novels Keep writing the way you love and create worlds the way you love and do not be discouraged by the bad comments. I am sorry if my comment offended you in any way. Sorry about my bad English

The writing quality is a sh#$t I don't like these book because The writing quality is not good. A lot of words for nothing please don't write like that 🙏

You can add an arc where mc destroys one of the worlds to take one of his loved ones from the hand of the world manager This will show the power of the mc and make him prestige among the world managers I hope you look at my proposal and tell me your response and opinion

I think it is better to add a fourth option to the system that allows rejecting system missions or giving mc cards that he can The system refused to use it