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Haizenberg
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2023-12-24 02:53

did I just spent coins in a dropped book?

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in All honesty, there isn't much chapters for me to write a review about it but it does seem promising. the writing is good, great good job author [img=Smitten]but on a serious note I was waiting for u to post on your first work until I realized you're going on a haitus. i really wish it goes well for you because tbh I did enhjoythe novel and it's a great experience to see others mind come to life on paper (screen) in a life and characters of its own.critic is something very common yet destructive to a creators mind, yet it can always build them up and push them higher. i hope it'll brethe latter for you. because despite everything, it's hard to satisfy a human and impossible to satisfy everyone. ik i sometimes nag about stuff that I don't like and I'm sorry. but genuinely just write for yourself. public validation is nice but depending on it is self destructive. enjoy your own craft, and practice and experience is what makes perfect... at least something near it?just seek satisfaction from yourself and past selves. you've came so far. and yk? the moon isn't even a perfect circle nor is the sun but it's their imperfections as a creature that makes their beauty (okay they're just hanging rock in the sky that goes disco but u get me) ahem, I'm not saying not to improve yourself. it just that I can't help but feel it was a heavy blow to you. I'm sorry if my previous review mightv've done u more harm than good. keep up your work and enjoy it man[img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]

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