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PattyBu
PattyBuLv1311mth
2024-05-29 19:13

So far like the plot of the story. MC is average but likable, common MC for me. Characters are ok, some annoying ,some funny and likable. 1 year dead to kill the Ghost king,that killed Original Father.Waiting for the author to make that happened. MC being to forgetful with the events when he suppose the author.(LOL🤣 but the normal for some authors not to remeber all the details😅) curious what is the plan with the original main characters? Still curious how did the MC destory this world.Did everybody dies or was invades by demons. oh well.

I Became The Mafia Boss Inside The Novel

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soLaugustus
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Throughout the age of humanity, man has discovered four innermost callings; later generations then referred to such callings as “man's true romance”. Man dreamed to explored the vastness space. Man aspire to pilot mechas and conquer lands and the sky. Man long for a thrilling and exciting battle against fate. And finally, Man discovered their instinctual yearning for the epitome of... coolness. When one thinks of coolness, plenty of things come to mind, but this story is merely one of them. Mafia. Well dressed fancy wiseguys, enormous wealth and beauties, intimidating presence, and a thousand subordinates under his hand. To be a Mafia Boss — a man that conquers people through fear and respect. But this is not a story of being a simple scum. It is not about simply crime. It is about romance, family, redemption and trust... because even among thieves, there is honor to be found. *** The MC is anti-hero not a villain. He's confident, smooth talker, straight forward and ruthless. He would kill and use anyone if needed, but despite that he prefers to not see bloodshed at all as he's traumatized of his past. But if needed, he will do so. He is pragmatic but also emotional. Ask your questions here.

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Rohan_Shinde_2731
Rohan_Shinde_2731Lv4

It is a good book to read and I am enjoying it very much

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Ghost_D_writer_
Ghost_D_writer_Lv12

so basically mc is to become king of underworld but mc following no killing protocol. I am not talking about unneccesory killing- I'm talking about neccessory killing. mc doesn't even killed the villain(done a lot of bad things) who came to assasinate mc... Mostly mc make everyone unconcious even if they could potentially harm him in future or they could become unexpected trouble easily for his plan.. Yeah that is very very annoying and dumb . I don't know what author is thinking but it's already many times happened that mc not kill someone who should be killed to make things easier... It's not as if killing was difficult for him.. and no this is not slice of life- mc have very cruel past of betrayal and fking anihilation of his whole family but still mc following no killing plan .

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Artiankillerfish
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in All honesty, there isn't much chapters for me to write a review about it but it does seem promising. the writing is good, great good job author [img=Smitten]but on a serious note I was waiting for u to post on your first work until I realized you're going on a haitus. i really wish it goes well for you because tbh I did enhjoythe novel and it's a great experience to see others mind come to life on paper (screen) in a life and characters of its own.critic is something very common yet destructive to a creators mind, yet it can always build them up and push them higher. i hope it'll brethe latter for you. because despite everything, it's hard to satisfy a human and impossible to satisfy everyone. ik i sometimes nag about stuff that I don't like and I'm sorry. but genuinely just write for yourself. public validation is nice but depending on it is self destructive. enjoy your own craft, and practice and experience is what makes perfect... at least something near it?just seek satisfaction from yourself and past selves. you've came so far. and yk? the moon isn't even a perfect circle nor is the sun but it's their imperfections as a creature that makes their beauty (okay they're just hanging rock in the sky that goes disco but u get me) ahem, I'm not saying not to improve yourself. it just that I can't help but feel it was a heavy blow to you. I'm sorry if my previous review mightv've done u more harm than good. keep up your work and enjoy it man[img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]

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Aady_Shrestha
Aady_ShresthaLv4

As of chapter 42, This story is perfect magical mafia fantasy that I never knew I needed. The story telling is wonderfully written with little noticeable grammatical errors. The author updates frequently with every chapter putting the entire story together in an easy to understand way. The background and world-building progresses as the story goes on. The character designs are the only issue I as we are introduced to a big cast early on it’s hard to remember how all of them look like. All in all a very good book with great potential.

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BrycenBeans
BrycenBeansLv13

Read about 40 chaps and what can I say this story took me by surprise. I was a little worried because I thought the story would drag but no almost every chapter kept my focus and was interesting. I'm really looking forward to the future chaps and academy arc but i'm going to stack for a while tho~

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Mhako
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[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] you are really doing a good job at the book keep it up

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Coin_Master_9395
Coin_Master_9395Lv13

My favorite novel! I just wish there were more chapters. The character development is great and the backstory of the main character is very intriguing.

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sapient
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system slave.............................

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