I enjoy the premise of the story, however the MC and certain developments that transpired in the story is very inconsistent. The character's personality being all over the place, seems like the author wants the MC to be many things all at once, but can't make up his mind on his ethics, morals etc. Not to mention there are already certain plot holes in the story. A complete beginner in combat somehow beating trained veterans. Yes he does have the Super Soldier Serum and The Force, but he got way too strong, way too quick in my opinion. Going from a below average person with strength weaker than most girls in his class(literally what the author wrote), to rivaling that of a soldier. And you may say that he has an advantage in stats etc, but I don't buy it at all. The MC himself beat people with greater stats than him. Overall, The Terror Infinity premise is interesting, everything else in my opinion is subpar. However I still hope the author continues writing, the language usage in this fanfic is much better than most of the fanfics. I just would suggest giving a little more thought to the power up and development of the MC. Making him starting off in a world which normal people can survive in, like the Walking Dead, etc where he can develop his skills. Possibly even giving him a mentor during the first scenario he has to clear, so he may develop survival skills, combat skills and many more. These are just my thoughts.
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I come from the future, and I can only agree that it became too strong too quickly since chapter 123, where in my opinion everything went downhill, that was an extreme and almost meaningless jump in strength, but before that everything It was incredibly good and sounded quite coherent to me, if you read Terror Infinity, you will know that there are some ways to acquire power stupidly quickly without any real disadvantages, as well as absorb power, like the bloodline of the vampire prince
