MC is a retard. He wastes his points, even knowing he's wasting them, and for what reason? Because he's a retard.

This story will be slightly different from Terror Infinity in some aspects, but overall will follow the same ideas. Alexander, the main character, will have to go through different fictional worlds, which can be Movies, Books, Anime or Games, so any piece of fiction may appear. Don't hesitate to suggest your ideas!

Suffers from generic problems like MC being kinda dumb and getting handouts when he doesn't deserve them BUT it was also pretty creative writing plot wise with the ending of the first movie. Overall this has the tell tale signs of a good base for the author. Hope to read his future works one day.

I enjoy the premise of the story, however the MC and certain developments that transpired in the story is very inconsistent. The character's personality being all over the place, seems like the author wants the MC to be many things all at once, but can't make up his mind on his ethics, morals etc. Not to mention there are already certain plot holes in the story. A complete beginner in combat somehow beating trained veterans. Yes he does have the Super Soldier Serum and The Force, but he got way too strong, way too quick in my opinion. Going from a below average person with strength weaker than most girls in his class(literally what the author wrote), to rivaling that of a soldier. And you may say that he has an advantage in stats etc, but I don't buy it at all. The MC himself beat people with greater stats than him. Overall, The Terror Infinity premise is interesting, everything else in my opinion is subpar. However I still hope the author continues writing, the language usage in this fanfic is much better than most of the fanfics. I just would suggest giving a little more thought to the power up and development of the MC. Making him starting off in a world which normal people can survive in, like the Walking Dead, etc where he can develop his skills. Possibly even giving him a mentor during the first scenario he has to clear, so he may develop survival skills, combat skills and many more. These are just my thoughts.

Mc's brain dead, mc acting with his emotions. Low star review because Mc is stupid. the author changes the plot of the novel and makes mc a brain dead person.

I don't know why the writers insist on having a naive and dumb mc that anyone who has read the novel for a while hates him. Why really???????

I'm liking the novel in general. I just hope you don't do like the original author did and start resurrecting the characters. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

excellent writing, superb dialogue, script of the first arc flawless, the atmosphere of terror infinity is very well transcribed, for the moment the fanfic is perfect

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