SoldatGottes

I enjoy the premise of the story, however the MC and certain developments that transpired in the story is very inconsistent. The character's personality being all over the place, seems like the author wants the MC to be many things all at once, but can't make up his mind on his ethics, morals etc. Not to mention there are already certain plot holes in the story. A complete beginner in combat somehow beating trained veterans. Yes he does have the Super Soldier Serum and The Force, but he got way too strong, way too quick in my opinion. Going from a below average person with strength weaker than most girls in his class(literally what the author wrote), to rivaling that of a soldier. And you may say that he has an advantage in stats etc, but I don't buy it at all. The MC himself beat people with greater stats than him. Overall, The Terror Infinity premise is interesting, everything else in my opinion is subpar. However I still hope the author continues writing, the language usage in this fanfic is much better than most of the fanfics. I just would suggest giving a little more thought to the power up and development of the MC. Making him starting off in a world which normal people can survive in, like the Walking Dead, etc where he can develop his skills. Possibly even giving him a mentor during the first scenario he has to clear, so he may develop survival skills, combat skills and many more. These are just my thoughts.

Kinda misinterpreted the message, my bad mate.

Honestly, Raven going with Bolt doesn't make much sense, it just doesn't fit well with an undercover mission for two people of the same team to defect at the same time. It would've been much easier to leave Raven behind. Of course, she would know about the undercover mission, and would act as Bolts partner in crime, by ensuring the teams safety etc. And I must say, the behaviour of Raven reminds me of a possessive girlfriend that must follow her BF everywhere, 24/7. But then again, it's just the beginning of the mission, so maybe things would end up better with both Raven and Bolt being undercover.