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Roxybr
RoxybrLv11yr
2023-06-04 15:57

Simplesmente nem nexo os pais são idiotas o protagonista e idiota nunca vi alguém tão idiota como os pais eo protagonista pais que não deixam o protagonista treinar mesmo sabendo do perigo do mundo e tem a mãe idiota dele eo protagonista que acha que só porque o nome dele é madara ele eo fodao o autor não tem criatividade em nomes e sem criatividade de desenvolvimento Simplesmente o protagonista diz que nunca aprendeu a lutar e luto cara a cara contra uma pessoa bem mais forte que ele sem usar energia amaldiçoada ele disse que nunca aprendeu arte marciais mais o autor esqueceu desse detalhe e fez o protagonista usar vários ataques de artes marcias Simplesmente horrivel

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Unchainedx
UnchainedxLv5

Beleza que você não sabe inglês, mas assassinar o português também já é foda, né irmão?

Roxybr
RoxybrLv1

Querido se vc não consegue aceitar a opinião dos outros não é culpa minha se controla e pense entes de vim fala de assuntos que não tem nada a ver com oque foi escrito por mim porfavo cale a boca

Unchainedx:Beleza que você não sabe inglês, mas assassinar o português também já é foda, né irmão?
Roxybr
RoxybrLv1

Eu fiz isso pois meu tradutor não estava funcionando e em todo lugar que eu comentava em português os autores sempre me respondiam

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kugi45443
kugi45443Lv3

as if you had a good fanfic, and dropped this fanfic, I'm very annoyed with people like you, I also saw your fanfic and it's the worst that I know, maybe you

kugi45443
kugi45443Lv3

copied it from somewhere, only 1 chapter in each fanfic 😂, I'm proud of the owner of this jujutsu fanfic, compared to people like

kugi45443:as if you had a good fanfic, and dropped this fanfic, I'm very annoyed with people like you, I also saw your fanfic and it's the worst that I know, maybe you
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