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Honestly this is very weak

She's being very annoying

This is putting a lot of strain on a relationship

I liked the story, the only problem is that if it weren't for the system, this would just be the Captain America movie with other characters added. That's why I think it would be good for the protagonist to be like a Hydra experiment and for him to suffer several physical tortures during training and psychological torture, making his hatred for Hydra increase. Later on, he manages to escape and becomes one of the volunteers for the super soldier serum, thus becoming a friend or Captain America himself. With that, he manages to end Hydra. And if you decide to follow Captain America's path, when he is frozen and then thawed, he returns to his work of ending Hydra, because Hydra is even in Shield. With all this, it is possible to include the events of the MCU itself, creating more suspense, including the Agents of Shield series, where this Hydra thing is stronger. My advice is that you focus on the Captain America movie, following Agents of Shield with the events of the MCU. happening

I liked the romance but the protagonist is very problematic because he is now a super powerful vampire, he didn't even have any family to call him, his mother didn't like him or anything like that, so I think this hatred is kind of useless for the protagonist.

I'm sorry for the huge text and I really liked that you are an author who doesn't care about bad comments I really liked you

Wanda is a good choice to have as a character but we must take into account the fact that Wanda only has her powers due to a small influence from Cytho so instead of putting her we could put some Xman characters in UA with Professor Xavier being one of the teachers. Storm could be a Pro hero based on her powers, and the vampire we could make her as a problematic character who was taken for experiments like Eri since her powers are very comprehensive.

One day I tried to create a story like this about a protagonist who creates games in the MCU, I wanted to make him have his own dimension like the other dimensional demons where people who enter the game sign a small contract that benefits the protagonist, but because of the protagonist's interference the barrier that Gu Yi has on Earth weakened and the dimensional demons were able to enter little by little and because of that Gu Yi discovered the protagonist's game and she used it to help the Earth along with other characters and each game that the protagonist created each magic or item in the game could be used through the contract with the protagonist so people could use magic and it would open a new era of magic with the protagonist managing everything behind it all and the protagonist would have a dimension with the power of technology because technology has been with humanity since the first stone was used to serve as a knife or something like that and assuming he defeated more dimensional demons he could absorb their dimensions with a little of their authority like that managing to ascend to one of the creator gods of the Marvel world so he could reach the MCU multiverse and increase his influence to later be able to go to other universes, but I gave up on that idea

Now the protagonist is useless, it would have been better to say he was a wizard or something like that, but what a stupid author

Now the protagonist is useless, it would have been better to say he was a wizard or something like that, but what a stupid author