From the start the protagonist has the worst, most unnecessary and sad backstory. The protagonist's parents die and then he is reincarnated and they die again. He has the power of foresight, instead of using this ability smart or strategically he reveals his predictions to his friend that was never introduced before. Then he gets adopted, then there's family arguments and then he joins the academy. He never trained before, and after serveral years still doesn't train or learn martial arts, and instead is a crippled third grade sorcerer that can't use cursed energy with a powerful seal. And then he goes to classes but he knows everything, he still acts like a child, and the interactions are bad. So after several chapters there's no progress or anything interesting.

the story seemed ok, but it just has a lot of small details which I dont like. First of al the powers, the mc has an amazing power which involves time, it'll grow stronger as time goes on and starts with a few abilities of which one is time stop. What i dont like about this is how he doesnt use this to its full potential. Why enter fights with dangerous opponents head first when you can stop time and do a double tap. There are also some oc's which are based on other animes and have their powers. It also seemed like the class was full of people which shouldnt be possible since even kyoto and tokyo, the hot spots for curses, have classes of ~4 people. Then the dialogues, I dont really like most of em, the way they refer to each others irks me a bit with the whole "senpai" while they know each other well enough to move past it (thats just a small thing tho). Dialogues and character building are also pretty lacking and then suddenly the mc gets angry cus dad almost gets killed and enters a "berserk mode" where he starts laughing like a maniac and killing people. Idk i just don't really like how the story was written. Perhaps if things were rewritten and the edgy/cringe things were removed it could be fun

DAS DAT GOOD SHIIIIIIIII !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Simplesmente nem nexo os pais são idiotas o protagonista e idiota nunca vi alguém tão idiota como os pais eo protagonista pais que não deixam o protagonista treinar mesmo sabendo do perigo do mundo e tem a mãe idiota dele eo protagonista que acha que só porque o nome dele é madara ele eo fodao o autor não tem criatividade em nomes e sem criatividade de desenvolvimento Simplesmente o protagonista diz que nunca aprendeu a lutar e luto cara a cara contra uma pessoa bem mais forte que ele sem usar energia amaldiçoada ele disse que nunca aprendeu arte marciais mais o autor esqueceu desse detalhe e fez o protagonista usar vários ataques de artes marcias Simplesmente horrivel

I do not know how to write a quotation. I really like the story, even though I haven't watched the anime. I got acquainted with the canon in the Wiki. I like the interaction of the main character with the characters. I hope this work will not slide, and there will be a bit of pathos. Especially when it comes to the canon, and he will be famous and strong. I look forward to the next chapters. Good luck author !!!🎉🎉

one of the best jujutsu fanfic and dont drop this fanfic, read this fanfic Jujutsu Kaisen: Unlock The Eight Secret Arts at the Start, you might get an idea from this fanfic

Good story. The only thing is that I found MCs character annoying. Emo, and somewhat self deprecating, there's even a point that he began acting like 'I'm a psychopath' which is lame in my opinion. His name is Madara and throughout the entire show, I can see the shadow of 'him' but because of some unnecessary actions, it felt more like a failed copycat of Madara's character. He's boring and too dramatic.

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Its pretty good hut the something about the way the author writes seem off. The quality is good and there are barely any grammar mistakes and even if there is one its very hard to notice.