The writing hooked me at first with its good pacing and nice mix of comedy, and I was genuinely excited about the potential of the story. But as I kept going, that excitement turned into frustration. The MC gets these insane OP talents, and you'd think he’s set up to be a game-changer, but instead, he turns out to be a total letdown. It’s not even about losing fights—that’s fine, it happens. But to have him constantly without any backbone, just getting walked all over, is beyond disappointing. It’s like he’s stuck in a loop of humiliation, and at some point, it stops being interesting and just gets painful to read. There are a few moments where you think, "Okay, maybe this is where he’ll turn it around," but no, it’s just more of the same cycle of cringe and torture. It’s like the author’s allergic to letting the MC have even a shred of dignity. He’s got all these talents, like that "Shadow Oblivion" thing that’s barely even used, and every time there’s a chance for him to show some actual growth or cleverness, it’s wasted. If anything, he just keeps getting stomped on, and the excuses for why he doesn’t fight back or use his abilities are paper-thin. I stuck it out through the paid chapters, hoping for some payoff, but all I got was regret. The author seems to think dragging the MC through endless misery is good character development, but it’s just the same tired trope of the hero who’s all promise and no delivery. Expect each new arc to be another round of him getting trampled by a stronger opponent, rinse and repeat. If that’s your thing, maybe you’ll enjoy it, but for me, it felt like a waste of potential. I kept hoping the author would throw us a bone—something to show that all this suffering was leading to a real transformation or a moment where the MC finally steps up. But it never happens, and by the time you realize that, you’re too deep in to feel anything but disappointment. I really wanted to like this, and you can see from my earlier comments that I was all in, but this one just doesn’t stick the landing. It's got a good premise and some solid writing, but the MC’s constant failures and the lack of any real progression just kill it for me. Hopefully, the author learns from this and comes back with something stronger in the future because, as it stands, I’m out. Thanks for the ride, but this isn’t what I signed up for.
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Sign, if you read pass the free Chapters mc really have characters dev and he's op. But well thank you for reading
Thought about it, but that deleting did me a solid. Good luck with the rest of the book.
MidnightWolfe:Sign, if you read pass the free Chapters mc really have characters dev and he's op. But well thank you for reading
deleting? i just got after the lost panda chap and i really cant bring myself to like this poosy ahh japanese with no backbone or much if any brain matter mc that's worst than a Wal-Mart welcome mat on a black Friday, like he's gotten no development and don't even seem like he was 16 yrs old and also got nothing to show for dude's more family than toretto but doesn't seem interested in using his cheats like the damn copy and upgrade i mean copy the healing spells to have some Supreme life saver and then literaly anything else like buffs or debuff so he can readily kill to lvl up but theres nothing he didn't even copy the kraken thunder skill wich would ve become ridiculously op with the upgrade
Sire_Azra:Thought about it, but that deleting did me a solid. Good luck with the rest of the book.image
The author was overly hyped but failed to meet expectations. By "deleting," I meant that the author removes negative comments.
josue_negron:deleting? i just got after the lost panda chap and i really cant bring myself to like this poosy ahh japanese with no backbone or much if any brain matter mc that's worst than a Wal-Mart welcome mat on a black Friday, like he's gotten no development and don't even seem like he was 16 yrs old and also got nothing to show for dude's more family than toretto but doesn't seem interested in using his cheats like the damn copy and upgrade i mean copy the healing spells to have some Supreme life saver and then literaly anything else like buffs or debuff so he can readily kill to lvl up but theres nothing he didn't even copy the kraken thunder skill wich would ve become ridiculously op with the upgrade
So basically MC wasted his potential and his cheat not only that people is stepping all over him, and MC just let it happen?
josue_negron:deleting? i just got after the lost panda chap and i really cant bring myself to like this poosy ahh japanese with no backbone or much if any brain matter mc that's worst than a Wal-Mart welcome mat on a black Friday, like he's gotten no development and don't even seem like he was 16 yrs old and also got nothing to show for dude's more family than toretto but doesn't seem interested in using his cheats like the damn copy and upgrade i mean copy the healing spells to have some Supreme life saver and then literaly anything else like buffs or debuff so he can readily kill to lvl up but theres nothing he didn't even copy the kraken thunder skill wich would ve become ridiculously op with the upgrade
thanks for the review and great reminder .. i couldn't finish 14 chapters.. a lot of BS here and there... it feels like the Author is taking his revenge on the MC... i don't want to make a review cuz i don't want to give it a ⭐ for the writing and grammar is fine ... the world building and background is under average but there are worse novels.. but i can't give it 3 or 4 ⭐ cuz in my view it doesn't deserve it ...and i don't want the rating to go up so others will think it's good to read...
made it to chapter 54 still 5yrs Old. I have an annoyance with child protagonists. when is the time skip??
you all are foolish Noax is not mc there plenty other like nyx ,ani ,eve,authur,nathan cool role but actual mc bahh😂
are you legit an idiot? why the hell would people PAY to read past the free chapters when the free chapters have been such a let-down? if you want people to read past the free chapters then you could at least make MC have a character development BEFORE the paid chapters.
MidnightWolfe:Sign, if you read pass the free Chapters mc really have characters dev and he's op. But well thank you for reading
