Why do authors love making main characters so disappointing? The guy reincarnated but acts like a child. If he had forgotten his past life and only remembered fragments, that would be understandable, but here he is—a full-grown adult acting like a kid. Chapter 21 is especially frustrating. He, his five-year-old twin sister, and another girl go through a portal. This other girl is taken by a flying creature, and here’s what the author writes: > "Nox and Nyx remained rooted to the spot, trying to come up with a plan. Nyx stayed calm, but Nox's fingers trembled. Why wouldn’t he be restless? Coming into this dimension had been his idea, after all. If anything went wrong here, it would be his fault, and he would blame himself for the rest of his life. ‘Do you still have any tricks?’ Nyx had a bitter smile on her face, staring at her brother from the side of her eyes." Notice that the five-year-old girl, who was just born recently, is calmer than this clueless idiot. Plus, the fact that he calls his twin sister his "older sister"… A grown man calling his *twin* sister, who’s five, his "big sister"? That’s where I draw the line.

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I just got done with chapter 248 and this book is good so far but there r still problems with it!!!! It should take fucking convincing the MCs onw fucking beast!!!! If the MC wants to dit or do something on his own then he should do it!!! The neasts r beast they r not fucking humans and they dont deserve to make any decisions or think they can do whatever they want!!! And the beast attitude suck amd need to change except for the jellyfish witch is actually nice and better then then the stupid cat and stupid panda that think they can do whatever they want and its really really stupid that they can just come out of the taming space on there own!!!

I just got on chapter 72 an honestly this book is ok maybe good but the MC needs more beast!!!! And the panda is stupid!!! It was a decent beast in the beginning but now at rhis point in the book its a piece of shit!!! its attitude fucks up the hole book just like the first beast the MC got witch is that stupid fucking lazy cat!!! The attitudes of both characters need to change to make this book better and the MC needs to get more badass beast!!!

that's all to be reviewed, by reading the other review it's say in the novel MC is an adult but author say is 16 years old, and still act like child well maybe he is a child

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The narrator gives up too much information freely, every three paragraphs has information that the narrator is just telling the reader. There is no suspense, no lead in, just straight explanations or telling the reader things. Which diminishes the value of any information if all of it is being told rather than shown. Every character is also treated like a joke, it makes it difficult to want to develop a connection to the characters. This is my current opinion as of chapter 15, this may change.

This isn’t a bad story by any means. For me, the biggest gripe is the constant POV changes. I understand the author is using them for world-building and plot development, but because they happen so frequently—and often with characters who are nowhere near each other—it feels like you’re trying to read five different stories at once. There are definitely other issues with the book (as many reviewers have pointed out), but none are as frustrating as the relentless shifts in perspective.

At first the story hooked me with its comedy but down the road the Mc is constantly being beaten to a pulp even though he has "ultimate skill" which should give him an edge but he never uses it