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CruelReality
CruelRealityLv41yr
2023-05-23 12:20

I could not get past the first three chapters. The premise is interesting but the problem I have is primarily with the setup and secondarily with the MC. The setup has to be the dumbest I have read in a long time. The MC chooses to be born into the world or MHA but to be quirkless with an arguably underpowered perk. I repeat, he picks a world where he will be discriminated against and then given the ability to wish for an OP power or one with limitless long term potential he asks for breathing techniques. The MC is a goody two shoes, which albeit not my favorite is fine for this setting. However, the sheer stupidiy and cringe he out puts is not fine. He has the audacity to get upset about him and his mom suffering discrimination after he chooses to be born in MHA. He yells about how he will be a top ten hero for no apparent reason. Overall, he is simple a cringe naive moron and the author lacks the ability to write dialogue that is good. That being said this is passable and perhaps it gets better, I simply couldn’t get past the end of chapter three so it isn’t for me.

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ObamaUchiha
ObamaUchihaLv4

most of your review is just pure personal opinion, you should be clarifying that.

alivegolden1
alivegolden1Lv5

Every review is an opinion, yours and mine too. That’s why it’s called a review.

ObamaUchiha:most of your review is just pure personal opinion, you should be clarifying that.
ObamaUchiha
ObamaUchihaLv4

i feel like reviews should be as unbiased as possible

alivegolden1:Every review is an opinion, yours and mine too. That’s why it’s called a review.
tt_g
tt_gLv4

That’s also an opinion.

ObamaUchiha:i feel like reviews should be as unbiased as possible
ObamaUchiha
ObamaUchihaLv4

it is

tt_g:That’s also an opinion.
alivegolden1
alivegolden1Lv5

How can review not be biased, I would actually be impressed by a person with an unbiased review that don’t recommend a novel but also recommend it at the same time.

ObamaUchiha:i feel like reviews should be as unbiased as possible
ObamaUchiha
ObamaUchihaLv4

dunno

alivegolden1:How can review not be biased, I would actually be impressed by a person with an unbiased review that don’t recommend a novel but also recommend it at the same time.
Pooyan_Hoshyar
Pooyan_HoshyarLv4

Hmm! I haven't exactly read the story yet so I can't give a genuine review. Breathing techniques are one of the most popular powers in anime world but to mix it with MHA verse... Well, I guess it depends on the author... It could be interesting. If we assume that MC can at the very least reach Yorrichi's level of power... I still don't see him doing anything exceptional in this World... Although we don't know Yorrichi's limit since he was simply a monster on his own that took down Muzan in a matter of seconds. But I personally love novels where MCs are belittled, scorned or looked down upon, only to prove everyone wrong and put them in their places. For now I'm just stock piling chapters. I just hope he doesn't end up igniting his sword on fire or lightning since those are just how swordsmen visualized their respective breathing to mimic their movements. Who's the love interest?

ZackDKaizo
ZackDKaizoAuthor

Love interest: Tsuyu Asui, if you dislike her then at least dont give her hate.

Pooyan_Hoshyar:Hmm! I haven't exactly read the story yet so I can't give a genuine review. Breathing techniques are one of the most popular powers in anime world but to mix it with MHA verse... Well, I guess it depends on the author... It could be interesting. If we assume that MC can at the very least reach Yorrichi's level of power... I still don't see him doing anything exceptional in this World... Although we don't know Yorrichi's limit since he was simply a monster on his own that took down Muzan in a matter of seconds. But I personally love novels where MCs are belittled, scorned or looked down upon, only to prove everyone wrong and put them in their places. For now I'm just stock piling chapters. I just hope he doesn't end up igniting his sword on fire or lightning since those are just how swordsmen visualized their respective breathing to mimic their movements. Who's the love interest?
CruelReality
CruelRealityLv4

Your love Interest taste is awesome and incredibly underrated, just couldn’t get past the MC.

ZackDKaizo:Love interest: Tsuyu Asui, if you dislike her then at least dont give her hate.
Pooyan_Hoshyar
Pooyan_HoshyarLv4

I won't... Most of the MHA out there all either choose harem or Momo... It's refreshing to see something new.

ZackDKaizo:Love interest: Tsuyu Asui, if you dislike her then at least dont give her hate.
ZackDKaizo
ZackDKaizoAuthor

sorry, first story mistake.

CruelReality:Your love Interest taste is awesome and incredibly underrated, just couldn’t get past the MC.
Ajay_Nunda_2928
Ajay_Nunda_2928Lv1

Thanks for the warning ⚠️

Daoist_Dan
Daoist_DanLv10

Sounds like the author should've had his character wake up in the world with the powers. People get distracted thinking they have to do the whole "Meet the god or system and begin picking." cliche.

CruelReality
CruelRealityLv4

Bingo

Daoist_Dan:Sounds like the author should've had his character wake up in the world with the powers. People get distracted thinking they have to do the whole "Meet the god or system and begin picking." cliche.
nicholas8293
nicholas8293Lv1

go read Chinese novels then, most if not all of them have it, it's called face-slapping, it's one of the most cliche and boring things I've ever seen.

Pooyan_Hoshyar:Hmm! I haven't exactly read the story yet so I can't give a genuine review. Breathing techniques are one of the most popular powers in anime world but to mix it with MHA verse... Well, I guess it depends on the author... It could be interesting. If we assume that MC can at the very least reach Yorrichi's level of power... I still don't see him doing anything exceptional in this World... Although we don't know Yorrichi's limit since he was simply a monster on his own that took down Muzan in a matter of seconds. But I personally love novels where MCs are belittled, scorned or looked down upon, only to prove everyone wrong and put them in their places. For now I'm just stock piling chapters. I just hope he doesn't end up igniting his sword on fire or lightning since those are just how swordsmen visualized their respective breathing to mimic their movements. Who's the love interest?
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