I could not get past the first three chapters. The premise is interesting but the problem I have is primarily with the setup and secondarily with the MC. The setup has to be the dumbest I have read in a long time. The MC chooses to be born into the world or MHA but to be quirkless with an arguably underpowered perk. I repeat, he picks a world where he will be discriminated against and then given the ability to wish for an OP power or one with limitless long term potential he asks for breathing techniques. The MC is a goody two shoes, which albeit not my favorite is fine for this setting. However, the sheer stupidiy and cringe he out puts is not fine. He has the audacity to get upset about him and his mom suffering discrimination after he chooses to be born in MHA. He yells about how he will be a top ten hero for no apparent reason. Overall, he is simple a cringe naive moron and the author lacks the ability to write dialogue that is good. That being said this is passable and perhaps it gets better, I simply couldn’t get past the end of chapter three so it isn’t for me.

Mc is born in MHA quirkless while god gave him choice for any power 😩 Maybe author is closet masochist and like when people abuse him so he wrote a fic about that scenario, who knows

Swordsmen are super bad with the world of boku no hero not to mention Yoriichi's talent is already at One For All level. That being said, you didn't put protagonists with a messiah complex or childish morals, nor did you have gods, so my friend, they are 5 stars

Honest review so first of all the concept of the story is quite good but the dialogues are cringe specially for the MC towards other at a young age secnd mother's quirk is spatial manipulation you should have used that and get her a job that would have made more sense as no person have still seen one piece ending and that can negatively impact manga industries you should also had show more struggle by her mother instead of just being supportive by MC so anyway my opinion 3/5 overall

keep up the good work I'm looking forward to what you will write I hope you can live up to my expectations of your writing

honestly i was skeptical at first as to how well he'll fare in mha but you've proven me wrong good job author i must say .....a really well written fanfic

Consistency and writing out a base for you plot is the most important if you only write a chapter a week people will drop this a cool idea I hope it turns out well

Hello, author, tell me, have you thought about the story in which Himiko Toga teamed up with the Carnage symbiote? Before the events of the original series, she could merge with him and hunt people, and at the same time remained a pretty girl at school for everyone.

so braindead. so unassuming. so lazy. so weak.