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GlN
GlNLv21yr
2023-07-21 00:10

I did enjoy this at the beginning, it had a good premise. Sadly the author doesn't think with his head. My issue with this story are the love interests. Inviting Selena kyle to stay with him, sleeping with him, etc. I was expecting Bruce to fund the orphanage and give her a better lifestyle not actually invite her to live with him at 10 years old. Having Barbara Gordan a decade older would mess a lot of things up as well. In short I feel like this fic is actually two fics. A very good one mixed with a classic cliche romcom which just makes it a mess. Relationships are so forced as well.

DC: I am Bruce Wayne

God_Doom
4.6
162 Chs

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God_Doom
God_DoomAuthor

🙄 But, there literally is no relationship right now. They are children. Also, Barbara was always closer to Bruce in age. It was only in the newest iterations after a couple of crises that the writers decided to make her so young compared to Bruce to include her in the young justice program. But again, I haven't even mentioned her age yet, so I wonder why the assumption? 🙂

1yr
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GlN
GlNLv2

You said I should arrange a play date with my daughter because he's about her age. You gave a timeline that Barbara is about the same age of bruce. Please remember what you actually write it creates horrible plot holes in the future

God_Doom:🙄 But, there literally is no relationship right now. They are children. Also, Barbara was always closer to Bruce in age. It was only in the newest iterations after a couple of crises that the writers decided to make her so young compared to Bruce to include her in the young justice program. But again, I haven't even mentioned her age yet, so I wonder why the assumption? 🙂
1yr
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God_Doom
God_DoomAuthor

It's not a plot hole. Jim Gordon 'THOUGHT' that in his mind. My father thinks I am the same age range as my cousin who is 6 years younger than me.

GlN:You said I should arrange a play date with my daughter because he's about her age. You gave a timeline that Barbara is about the same age of bruce. Please remember what you actually write it creates horrible plot holes in the future
1yr
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mow
mowLv4

Wheres that MHA story update at?

1yr
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GlN
GlNLv2

mow:Wheres that MHA story update at?
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Monocle_GentleSir
Monocle_GentleSirLv13

Read what the guy wrote properly he/she didn't say "it's" a plot hole he/she said It "creates" a plot hole

God_Doom:It's not a plot hole. Jim Gordon 'THOUGHT' that in his mind. My father thinks I am the same age range as my cousin who is 6 years younger than me.
1yr
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That_Annoying_guy
That_Annoying_guyLv4

How many is in the harem?

God_Doom:🙄 But, there literally is no relationship right now. They are children. Also, Barbara was always closer to Bruce in age. It was only in the newest iterations after a couple of crises that the writers decided to make her so young compared to Bruce to include her in the young justice program. But again, I haven't even mentioned her age yet, so I wonder why the assumption? 🙂
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God_Doom
God_DoomAuthor

Truthfully, I haven't decided yet. But it won't be too big. I will only include those who have some actual chemistry with him.

That_Annoying_guy:How many is in the harem?
8mth
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Sageofinfintypaths
SageofinfintypathsLv12

is there any Yuri especially between the harem members with or without the mc

God_Doom:🙄 But, there literally is no relationship right now. They are children. Also, Barbara was always closer to Bruce in age. It was only in the newest iterations after a couple of crises that the writers decided to make her so young compared to Bruce to include her in the young justice program. But again, I haven't even mentioned her age yet, so I wonder why the assumption? 🙂
8mth
God_Doom
God_DoomAuthor

Nope

Sageofinfintypaths:is there any Yuri especially between the harem members with or without the mc
8mth
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Sageofinfintypaths
SageofinfintypathsLv12

thanks for replying author

God_Doom:Nope
8mth
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Sageofinfintypaths
SageofinfintypathsLv12

and it won't happen right

God_Doom:Nope
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God_Doom
God_DoomAuthor

Absolutely not

Sageofinfintypaths:and it won't happen right
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Sageofinfintypaths
SageofinfintypathsLv12

That's makes me happy

God_Doom:Absolutely not
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