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Monocle_GentleSir1dCommentedCh 3 In The Water- Monocle_GentleSir1mthPosted
What a piece of $h*t criminal you are you just plagiarized someone else's book and is making money from it. Anyway, nothing more to say for a piece of dog$h*t like you the real book is called A Dragon's Roar by spectre4hire It is posted on fanfiction.net and is already completed hopefully the readers see this review before the pile of dog$h*t deletes this post
- Monocle_GentleSir3mthCommented
you seem to have not watched the third movie properly. Change the oogway part
These two were never interested in power yet the world bestowed upon them the greatest power. They held untold strength even though they were not willing to go to the extreme like all those who failed before them. - Monocle_GentleSir5mthReplied to Ozonelayer
lazy
Seeing Tut just lying on the ground in agony, I was both worried and frightened as I tried my best to help or ease the pain. I've known Tut since I was young, and never have I seen him show any form of pain; it almost gave me the impression that he was invincible. - Monocle_GentleSir5mthCommented
just put 8 pm 9 pm or 10 pm just like a normal person an orphanage is not military lol
"Well, it's almost 20:00, let's sing Happy Birthday" said Sister Maria as she got up and went to get the cake she had personally baked for the celebration. - Monocle_GentleSir6mthCommented
If you need time to rest do so. I hope for your fast recovery.
Drop some love if you liked the chapter guys! I apologize for uploading much in the last week. I had to get an appendix surgery and it had left me in a bad spot physically and financially. I will try my best to update the chapters consistently from now. - Monocle_GentleSir7mthCommented
The author keeps switching between the two seems like he can't make up his mind about who is older.
Draco often felt envious and jealous of the elder brother, believing that Skyler should be the elder based on his height alone. - Monocle_GentleSir7mthCommented
DF you just said that Skyler is the youngest son in the earlier chapter. So how could Draco be younger than him??
He had affection for his mother, Narcissa, who doted on him, and Draco, his proud and showy younger brother. - Monocle_GentleSir8mthReplied to PUERKO_Senpai
Bro is preordering
Well, it looks like we're at the beginning of the Black Widow movie. Even though I'll probably have a romantic relationship with Natasha and Yelena in the future, they're still children, so I'm not very interested in saving them personally. Although I will meet them in the future. - Monocle_GentleSir8mthReplied to BJ1869
Yep, taking a break would have been better than rushing the fic. Adios.
"Very well. I suppose you are right, there is a few things I can use them for. But you know Ciri, you shouldn't worry about those you left behind, you'll meet them eventually, and I'll help you with all the potential dangers that they might face because of your close proximity to them. I will even kill Emhyr and trap his soul inside an object. Maybe a rug on the floor of some kind?" - Monocle_GentleSir8mthReplied to DesMark
Bro, you need to research what you are writing about.
AN- Was it too out of character for Hikaru? - Monocle_GentleSir8mthReplied to Drojam
Yep, it just makes the author's rant stupid. We are not even 100 chapters yet the author already has dementia.
[A/N: Before y'all complain. Our dear MC doesn't play Tekken like an addict, like how he stated in the paragraph, he only played Tekken 6 once in every month and years. If you want to complain then suit yourself. Just know that I won't be responding to you.] - Monocle_GentleSir9mthReplied to Tenyo
explain
Upon that bed, stained by what seemed to be blood, lay a child of barely ten years, their body motionless but their appearance striking. Their golden hair, like a halo of light, framed their head like a blazing flame. - Monocle_GentleSir9mthCommented
You don't use "their" on a single individual.
Upon that bed, stained by what seemed to be blood, lay a child of barely ten years, their body motionless but their appearance striking. Their golden hair, like a halo of light, framed their head like a blazing flame. - Monocle_GentleSir9mthCommented
Lazy writing at its finest
This paragraph has been deleted. - Monocle_GentleSir9mthReplied to Ehnvy
That is very interesting
"ZEHAHAHA! You have no choice! Watch me, Pops! I'm gonna build a fleet of my own and make you king!" - Monocle_GentleSir10mthCommented
hopefully, the grammar will improve as you write more and not outright ignore the mistakes you noticed out of laziness.
"Master Oogway taught me that you were the Dragon Warrior. Nothing is an accident. I apologize for my previous actions, I hope I can be forgiven." Master Shifu said and apologized before bowing down his head, shocking the Furious Five at seeing their master bow down to someone other than Master Oogway. - Monocle_GentleSir10mthReplied to shirou_sureiya
- Monocle_GentleSir11mthCommented
Considering the pace of the story is currently going it would be really weird for Narutoxkushina pairing. Even though you already warned us in the synopsis I think you approached this the wrong way author knowing what might happen later on leaves me in bad taste. The writing quality is really good though tbh.
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