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Aady_Shrestha
Aady_ShresthaLv41yr
2023-08-04 13:01

Honestly, a pretty good novel. I’m not someone who rates novels lightly. But I’ll take everything into consideration. I do have to say, however, that the story is very intriguing. The only worrying thing is that the story is a Harem. Now, if done, right, it could be good. As of the chapter I am on this story is more focused on Bruce’s development, which is a good thing. I do hope however, Bruce doesn’t become too overpowered then it takes the fun away.

DC: I am Bruce Wayne

God_Doom
4.6
164 Chs

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TyrantTron335
TyrantTron335Lv12

Mc is Batman the loneliest hero ever. He works alone in Alley and asexual hero. So i pray for this lonely bat.

1yr

Lackada1sical
Lackada1sicalLv4

MC is an SI from our earth (which means, aware of several FF's &/or comics/movie/tv/novel series of several stories that include DCVerse)MC is too indecisive/lame. Lack of willpower & intuitive mind even though he has perfect recall and forges mutant power. Too afraid of changing plots due to author lack of creativeness Story itself is a slice of life style of writing & too much info dump (slow MC & story progression). Lack of utilisation of his previous life knowledge & experiences.The story itself lacks author creativity & based on the reviews itself a possibility that author deletes negative reviews.Author has the guts to create a Patreon even though the story/FF itself is like a batman origins side story which is quite laughable xD

1yr
Ace_of_your_heart
Ace_of_your_heartLv4

just cause he is Batman I will give 5 stars

1yr
GlN
GlNLv2

I did enjoy this at the beginning, it had a good premise. Sadly the author doesn't think with his head. My issue with this story are the love interests. Inviting Selena kyle to stay with him, sleeping with him, etc. I was expecting Bruce to fund the orphanage and give her a better lifestyle not actually invite her to live with him at 10 years old. Having Barbara Gordan a decade older would mess a lot of things up as well. In short I feel like this fic is actually two fics. A very good one mixed with a classic cliche romcom which just makes it a mess. Relationships are so forced as well.

1yr
Kayzer9
Kayzer9Lv4

I got bored of reading, the childhood saga is a sleeping pill and there is nothing that motivates me to read this

1yr
Am_Vein_Enta
Am_Vein_EntaLv1

The story is fine for killing time, don't take itu seriously. Basically this is happy go lucky bruce wayne with his loli harem, not my cup of tea.

1yr
ydoBoN
ydoBoNLv1

Not for me. Posing this just to remember. .............................................................................................................................

1yr
Cosmic_Witcher
Cosmic_WitcherLv4

Presenting the offering for Lord Doom, the most powerful and feared leader in the cosmos. We humbly request you to share your epic saga, O majestic one.

1yr
Kratos5628
Kratos5628Lv2

I think that this story has a lots of great potential even greater than your other story. The character unlike the other one is a underdog so it would be an easier and more interesting to read. There are stakes involved with mc’s life. One wrong move and he is dead which is a lot more thrilling than your other marvel fic who is born with powers of new god and is quite op. I am really excited to see where you would go with this. Cheers.

1yr
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