Mc is Batman the loneliest hero ever. He works alone in Alley and asexual hero. So i pray for this lonely bat.

MC is an SI from our earth (which means, aware of several FF's &/or comics/movie/tv/novel series of several stories that include DCVerse)MC is too indecisive/lame. Lack of willpower & intuitive mind even though he has perfect recall and forges mutant power. Too afraid of changing plots due to author lack of creativeness Story itself is a slice of life style of writing & too much info dump (slow MC & story progression). Lack of utilisation of his previous life knowledge & experiences.The story itself lacks author creativity & based on the reviews itself a possibility that author deletes negative reviews.Author has the guts to create a Patreon even though the story/FF itself is like a batman origins side story which is quite laughable xD

just cause he is Batman I will give 5 stars

I did enjoy this at the beginning, it had a good premise. Sadly the author doesn't think with his head. My issue with this story are the love interests. Inviting Selena kyle to stay with him, sleeping with him, etc. I was expecting Bruce to fund the orphanage and give her a better lifestyle not actually invite her to live with him at 10 years old. Having Barbara Gordan a decade older would mess a lot of things up as well. In short I feel like this fic is actually two fics. A very good one mixed with a classic cliche romcom which just makes it a mess. Relationships are so forced as well.

I got bored of reading, the childhood saga is a sleeping pill and there is nothing that motivates me to read this

Honestly, a pretty good novel. I’m not someone who rates novels lightly. But I’ll take everything into consideration. I do have to say, however, that the story is very intriguing. The only worrying thing is that the story is a Harem. Now, if done, right, it could be good. As of the chapter I am on this story is more focused on Bruce’s development, which is a good thing. I do hope however, Bruce doesn’t become too overpowered then it takes the fun away.

Not for me. Posing this just to remember. .............................................................................................................................

Presenting the offering for Lord Doom, the most powerful and feared leader in the cosmos. We humbly request you to share your epic saga, O majestic one.

I think that this story has a lots of great potential even greater than your other story. The character unlike the other one is a underdog so it would be an easier and more interesting to read. There are stakes involved with mc’s life. One wrong move and he is dead which is a lot more thrilling than your other marvel fic who is born with powers of new god and is quite op. I am really excited to see where you would go with this. Cheers.