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LazyBlack
LazyBlackAuthor1yr
2023-12-29 09:42

Well, after 120 chapters I finally decided to write a review, I don't have anything special to say except that the first ten chapters are really garbage and if I had a chance, I would re-write them again, but unfortunately I can't, apart from that, I think the novel is not bad and can be considered at average level and acceptable, cough cough, anyway if you have any questions please ask

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Yang_ki
Yang_kiLv4

young demon dropped ?

Anos_VoldigoadGod
Anos_VoldigoadGodLv4

I hope note I enjoyed that novel

Yang_ki:young demon dropped ?
Anos_VoldigoadGod
Anos_VoldigoadGodLv4

u got a discord? link it if u do

Kriti_Ttam
Kriti_TtamLv12

I am really into it because I am kinda into OP type genre like "Fated Villain" that are too OP but just like to manipulate things although sometimes I do get annoyed why they leave some enemy alive because they are too weak despite MC finding their plot against him anyway overall I 8 star for me to this novel out of 10

Excentrisk
ExcentriskLv12

Did you drop the novel ?

ImmortalGhost
ImmortalGhostLv13

Harem?

velzard_tempest
velzard_tempestLv3

please I am poor but I wanna read this novel so bad can you make it free for 24 hours please only 24 please 🥺

Facebook_Account_0171
Facebook_Account_0171Lv1

Hey Author, what did you decide for the mother? I have a GREAT SUGGESTION, Just make the mc's mother virgin, now there is a question of how she gave birth. Just say the mc's father has a physique which can't get close to women, which was solved after the mc birth after the father improved his cultivation(or not solved if you want). So the mc's mother took three fruits to give birth to the three children(or smth like that) A I'm sure everyone will be satisfied with it. If you have have already added the mother to the harem, Then PLEASE change the mother character setting when she was introduced. And, if you have not, then please change the character setting and add her to the harem. EVERYONE WILL LOVE THIS SETTING (I think) Lastly, I LOVE this work of yours. Hope you consider my suggestion.

Anos_VoldigoadGod
Anos_VoldigoadGodLv4

good

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Jeremy_5108
Jeremy_5108Lv13

😔

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Jeremy_5108
Jeremy_5108Lv13

don't abandon this work bruh 😔

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absolue
absolueLv13

Remake? Okay, when do you start it?

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Black_Domain
Black_DomainLv3

Author buffed MC to peak of the peak and after playing around for a while , he became out of topic. 😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨

Sumit_Indi
Sumit_IndiLv12

not above average but it is far above avarage. and those who think mc is omnipotent don't forget there are 2 beings of same level and villain (Our MC) does have some insane standards for women but neglecting some of those beauties like one which is his servant from nothingness which is described as hot as hell. I personally wanted her to be in MC's harem but I think she is reserved for future so I will wait

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DaoistUvclvV
DaoistUvclvVLv10

Completely unrelated to the story and a completely random thought: Whenever a mc falls in love or is interested in a women and he makes it verbal he is termed as SIMP , this just kills good romance . All these ppl complain uselessly for everything and that make him seem pathetic . Becoz these ppl are ok with mc sleeping with every curvy woman with a good face and let the mc call it as a one time thing and act all emotionless and edgy . But has anyone ever thought how it would be - A romance between a edgy and cold mc who only shows his feelings to a single woman and she responds similarly . (U stupid's will call it as mc being simp and kill the romance anyways , Coz all u guys need is " mc treats woman like tools for pleasure release and woman go crazy due to it " . But that is the true definition of simp - a man who drools and lusts for every single woman , even if he gives grand excuses and his attitude is cool and edgy .) All authors write harem coz they want to keep u guys reeled in and invested in the PLOT ( Mc making different types of woman his property and not a single one has a fully flushed personality . All woman will have a single label and will follow it down to a T. Like a tsundere always keep rejecting his advances even though mc already done the deed . A cold beauty always becomes loose both in the head and below when mc is in the vicinity . Almost all of them will be overprotective and obsessive of him , and after mc is introduced they will lose their own life , fate and story. The woman are just a part of mc , i.e. , they are tailored into his story and are always available for him no matter how important of a position they can be in ) BTW GOOD NOVEL AUTHOR IS A 3.5 STARS FOR ME , BECAUSE I AM STRINGENT WITH THE RATINGS , DONT MIND ME . I WANTED TO VENT MY FRUSTRATIONS WITH THE READERS .

Kriti_Ttam
Kriti_TtamLv12

Overall Everything is Good for now that is at least for me I do hope author read this comment as I want to say is that please do make mc use all his abilities in a useful way because currently he is too OP literally like final boss so rather then going around like some protagonists for finding opportunities to grow in power he should sit in high place and do the manipulating the final boss or villain does . There are lot of ways he can message with protagonists that appears like creating systems for specially that hates those protagonists like 2nd or 3rd rate villain give them opportunities so that they fight protagonists something like that and upgrade his family background to top level and they only listen to him as he keeps his eyes around his maids so that they get opportunity and get stronger and of some hidden people try to something to his plans he would kill them from behind and he can even create clone or something overall I want to say is if he is always in spotlight and people will keep coming to him for messing with him because they don't know his powers at that point it will literally become "slice of life" type story like where mc keep on face slapping while people keep on coming to him as we all know face slapping where mc literally gets into fight with anyone even beggar what I want to say is As mc here is op and like final boss so he should behave like one not go around the world and look for secret realms like protagonists does in typical storyline so they can get stronger.....Well this is just from my prospective hope author you do some think on wether my suggestion is right or wrong it's completely up to you to take it after if in later the novel transform into face slapping novel then I would have no choice but to drop it because I am too tired of slice of life or face slapping novels lately

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