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I read 513 chapters and Novel was Ok not peak not one of the best but just good MC is persuing the free and unfetterd dao but ultimately because of Author Mc feels restricted. One he ignores his desire for more women even though he knows he wants it and excuse is that woman should be equal to him. but at the start of the relationship he himself is not equal to her even 1 or 2 more women would make a big difference in his free and unfetterd image in readers mind as he is bound to only one woman. second most of the time everything feels like plot armour. because how close he is to absolute death and survives this reminds me of protagonists in Villain novels who gets saved because of insane plot armour. third many deaths does not have deep emotional impact which makes reader More immersive in novel. Even that lin fan feels more fit to the image of free and unfetterd. as he does many things he desires and wants.

problem is with bad english. some words can be accepted but changing pronoun of male character and female character is diabolical

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Author, you should just quit. If you can't even write your story with your own imagination and creativity and using AI, then you shouldn't even become author. Why even bother being author when U can't even write a story of your own imagination and need help from Robot.

literally man MC is so damn brain-dead it' ridiculous.I read on free platform till 132 chap. and immediately dropped it when he joined outer court. Author is so damn childish it's insane like always hiding powers for idiotic reasons. First his freind dies for this same reason and even then mc doesn't learn his lesson. This novel was pure trash from the start. where MC acts like child and reason is that his emotions got reset. that made me cringe hard.

mc is literally the most idiotic character in fiction. Do not read this novel if you don't want to read something childish. First Mc's friend dies cuz MC puts seal on his power. and later regrets it. But even more ridiculous part is that Mc instead of using tricks which could make killing enemies easier uses great sword for reason that using trick is not good and underhanded. Author needs to grow up. this story is waste of your time, if you want to read novel where mc is smart and makes smart choices then don't read it. if you want to read novel where MC is Brain dead then read this.

mc is far too foolish and not to mention describing heaven as omnipotent, omniscient is enough to see that mc will be just third rate villain not the villain like gu chang. expecting that much will be fools dream after all. it's just incompetent author. who can't even make his own mc smart enough

mc is fu**ing stupid. what more can you expect from othe characters

Mc is the worst thing in this novel which makes novel itself kind of below mid He has power of mind reading yet he trusts someone easily and he doesn't constantly check out the thought's of the ones who are becoming closer to him. far too idiotic mc.

it was kind of interesting first 190 chapters but later it turns mc into sh*t. and the way he behaves doesn't make your novel seem Harem.