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Kriti_Ttam
Kriti_TtamLv128mth
2024-07-08 14:54

Overall Everything is Good for now that is at least for me I do hope author read this comment as I want to say is that please do make mc use all his abilities in a useful way because currently he is too OP literally like final boss so rather then going around like some protagonists for finding opportunities to grow in power he should sit in high place and do the manipulating the final boss or villain does . There are lot of ways he can message with protagonists that appears like creating systems for specially that hates those protagonists like 2nd or 3rd rate villain give them opportunities so that they fight protagonists something like that and upgrade his family background to top level and they only listen to him as he keeps his eyes around his maids so that they get opportunity and get stronger and of some hidden people try to something to his plans he would kill them from behind and he can even create clone or something overall I want to say is if he is always in spotlight and people will keep coming to him for messing with him because they don't know his powers at that point it will literally become "slice of life" type story like where mc keep on face slapping while people keep on coming to him as we all know face slapping where mc literally gets into fight with anyone even beggar what I want to say is As mc here is op and like final boss so he should behave like one not go around the world and look for secret realms like protagonists does in typical storyline so they can get stronger.....Well this is just from my prospective hope author you do some think on wether my suggestion is right or wrong it's completely up to you to take it after if in later the novel transform into face slapping novel then I would have no choice but to drop it because I am too tired of slice of life or face slapping novels lately

I reincarnated in a cultivation world as a omnipotent villain

LazyBlack
4.4
213 Chs

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VampirePrince
VampirePrinceLv14

how will he have fun then?

8mth
Kriti_Ttam
Kriti_TtamLv12

Novel destiny villain! Doesn't he have fun !? He plot and scheme against others no one knows about it he even plays here instead by the time people know it's already too late . And going into secret realms for treasure to increase strength is the way of protagonists not villain because mc here is like final villain not some side villain and final villain always use prawn to make move he can literally do anything he wants if he simply does the way he is doing then why is Op then what's the use of having Op abilities and not even bothering to use it ! Are thise abilities is for decoration then !! Hell if I were the villain of this novel I would caused Chaos he can go back in time he is literally Omnipotent and what does he do ! Run like protagonists and do some face slapping!!! Bruh it's alright for now but if this is how he enjoys by simply being in a spotlight where people come just to get face slapping then it's absolutely going to bored and last I said it's my OPINION I AM NOT FORCING PEOPLE TO THINK LIKE NOR I I AM SAYING AUTHOR SHOULD IMMEDIATELY CHANGE ACCORDING TO MY THOUGHTS BECAUSE THERE MAY BE SOME FLAWS IN MY THEORY AS WELL SO I JUST SUGGESTING IT'S UP TO THE AUTHOR

VampirePrince:how will he have fun then?
8mth
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Kriti_Ttam
Kriti_TtamLv12

You can even try "Primordial sin system" novel where mc despite being mc or protagonists he acts like villain he also moves behind the scene although at the beginning it may not much but Later is absolutely awesome he simply stays in one place where no one can do anything to him and he simply does things using his clone in other words whatever he does wether it's killing or anything it won't come back to him .....there are many novel in my list all in all I just don't like face slapping where literally everyone wants to mess with mc and still people come even after getting beaten

VampirePrince:how will he have fun then?
8mth
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LazyBlack
LazyBlackAuthor

Well, after 120 chapters I finally decided to write a review, I don't have anything special to say except that the first ten chapters are really garbage and if I had a chance, I would re-write them again, but unfortunately I can't, apart from that, I think the novel is not bad and can be considered at average level and acceptable, cough cough, anyway if you have any questions please ask

1yr

Kagio
KagioLv4

I really like this novel. I love how OP he is and hope it stays like that.

1yr
DaoistsZYgr4
DaoistsZYgr4Lv4

please upload 2 chapter per day . . .

1yr
Kasmin_Norman
Kasmin_NormanLv3

please can you update this novel I like this kind of novels

1yr
assad1830
assad1830Lv6

In one word: Tasteless Tasteless Tasteless Tasteless Tasteless Tasteless Tasteless Tasteless

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DaoistLORD_PARAGON
DaoistLORD_PARAGONLv4

This novel is BS ngl I expected more not the same thing we see on webnovel everytime MC is op but doesn’t have any sense at all Instead of him to travel around multiverse Create worlds or new races,do something new he first decided to take revenge I’m really disappointed

1yr
DaoistUvclvV
DaoistUvclvVLv10

Completely unrelated to the story and a completely random thought: Whenever a mc falls in love or is interested in a women and he makes it verbal he is termed as SIMP , this just kills good romance . All these ppl complain uselessly for everything and that make him seem pathetic . Becoz these ppl are ok with mc sleeping with every curvy woman with a good face and let the mc call it as a one time thing and act all emotionless and edgy . But has anyone ever thought how it would be - A romance between a edgy and cold mc who only shows his feelings to a single woman and she responds similarly . (U stupid's will call it as mc being simp and kill the romance anyways , Coz all u guys need is " mc treats woman like tools for pleasure release and woman go crazy due to it " . But that is the true definition of simp - a man who drools and lusts for every single woman , even if he gives grand excuses and his attitude is cool and edgy .) All authors write harem coz they want to keep u guys reeled in and invested in the PLOT ( Mc making different types of woman his property and not a single one has a fully flushed personality . All woman will have a single label and will follow it down to a T. Like a tsundere always keep rejecting his advances even though mc already done the deed . A cold beauty always becomes loose both in the head and below when mc is in the vicinity . Almost all of them will be overprotective and obsessive of him , and after mc is introduced they will lose their own life , fate and story. The woman are just a part of mc , i.e. , they are tailored into his story and are always available for him no matter how important of a position they can be in ) BTW GOOD NOVEL AUTHOR IS A 3.5 STARS FOR ME , BECAUSE I AM STRINGENT WITH THE RATINGS , DONT MIND ME . I WANTED TO VENT MY FRUSTRATIONS WITH THE READERS .

1yr
lolbingolol
lolbingololLv13

Novel is very good. Mc is overpowered and domineering and the harem has good women in it. World building is well thought out and the power system is easy to understand. Writing is decent and updates are consistent.

1yr
Black_Domain
Black_DomainLv3

Bro I love his OP starting.But still please give him worthy opponents.If he can see through and destroy everything there won't be much fun..... Add some: (just suggestions)✓ mysteriosus girls/goddess charecters✓ Another hidden identity (clone?) with low power.(else can't see others true face)✓ great lovely harem. yandre is good but can't cross line.✓ plot twists✓ Yet adventure another multiverse. Great job anyway.keep up.

1yr
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