It doesn't feel like a percy Jackson dark souls crossover, it kinda reads like a novelization of a darksouls play through with some extra flavor text added in here and there to make it seem like a crossover. There is so much more possible than just some tiny little flecks of the Percy Jackson world thrown in. Like the fact that you've made Percy a pyromancer, Rick Roridan has put into place that the Greek gods hate it when another god, or another god's child, encroaches on their divinity. I mean, that was the premise of the first book, and it keeps getting brought up later on in the series. Sure, most of the Greek gods or goddesses that have something to do with fire are depicted as kinda chill, but they are still Greek gods/goddesses, and pety comes with the territory.Now sure, you can argue that dark souls pyromancy comes from the first flame and the dark soul, which are separate from the greeks, but that doesn't change the fact that percy has a spark of greek divinity right there inside of him ready to feel him use pyromancy. also, a side note on that praise the sun gets heard by Apolo, and he'd recognize that you, a Greek demigod, are not praising him.sighlook, I really enjoy the idea of a Percy Jackson cross with Dark Souls. there's so much you can do there, but you've basically thrown out most of the Percy Jackson lore, and individuality of the main character. Right now, I would never call this story a Percy Jackson Dark Souls crossover.
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LIKE*sigh*I chose pyromancy because, 1 it was easier to level up. and also because, 2 Percy would learn pyromancy anyway.also about the praise the sun thing you should know about the dark souls lore. since here it's a fake sun created by gwyndolin....of course if your not interested in the dark souls lore you wouldnt understand.another thing, darks souls world does not mean it's the Percy Jackson world. and another thing, the reason Percy is acting like it's a playthrough it's because it IS. I have to actually play the game again in order to follow Percy (as I have stated). after all, it wouldn't be good if I couldn't remember anything m, so I played alongside writing
In my opinion I think it would have been better if at each bonfire Percy gets a slightly larger interval of days in the 'real world' where the original plot of Percy Jackson takes place with the alterations granted by his new powers, also the author saying that pyromancy is the fastest to level up is fair but theirs also the fact that Percy is known for water based magic, a simple change could be just going full combatant using strong weapons and water based spells or using sorceries but instead of it being crystals or what have you it could be water, it could still be cool without that. Also after the first souls game should definitely have gone back to Percy Jacksons original world because whats the point of it being a Percy Jackson fanfic if the protagonist being Percy Jackson affects the world in basically no way.
is this fic about Percy jackson getting thrown into the world of dark souls, and if it's so, does Percy get back to his home world?