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TheOne_Tak3mi
TheOne_Tak3miLv41yr
2023-08-19 19:00

40 chapters but only 5 reviews... I'll read it, but you gotta admit that's pretty sus...

Percy Jackson: the dark souls survivor

Scathach_
4.3
84 Chs

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Scathach_
Scathach_Author

yeah, but I can say i do my best

1yr
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Scathach_
Scathach_Author

so any thoughts

1yr
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TheOne_Tak3mi
TheOne_Tak3miLv4

I'm still at the beginning chapters.it's well written, but I did notice one crucial thing that's missing at the beginning. and that's emotion, we really don't see much of what Percy is feeling. for example, being scared when he wakes up alone in a cell, his first kill, etc. I know it's mentioned that he's being strong so that he can meet his mother again, but at least show something.it does get better as the chapters go by, so it's not gonna be an issue for long if the improvement continues.

1yr
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Dao_of_Melancholy
Dao_of_MelancholyLv13

Criminally underrated love it so far and only hope it becomes more popular in the future good work Scáthach keep up the good work. . Yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah

1yr

Generally_Denny
Generally_DennyLv4

Reveal spoiler

1yr
wolfphantom
wolfphantomLv15

It feels more like a game run-through than a story.. There's not really a world description nor a build-up of anything, and the writing reads kinda choppy to me.. other than a few more minor issues I have with this story, it's a meh kinda of story to me. one that I'd read if I was waiting on other story updates...

1yr
Big_jay1o
Big_jay1oLv4

be de bop now u have this cat with a top hay for a good book.

1yr
slowmaster
slowmasterLv4

First of all this story is literally at the bottom of the Pearcy Jackson tag, and it intrigued me.secondly the story and premise are good, but the Pov changes are a bit confusing, like one moment its 3rd person and mid paragraph it switches to first personOther than that it's fine

1yr
Sir_Squirrle
Sir_SquirrleLv4

the premise of the story has potential, but the grammar and writing style are just terrible.

10mth
X1AutumnLeaf
X1AutumnLeafLv13

interesting, can't wait to see how this develops.though slightly worried about the updating Stability due to the author playing the game side by side with the story.

1yr
ZCOOL_999
ZCOOL_999Lv4

I really enjoy the story and the fact that is a percy jackson fanfic

1yr
_Tea_Lover_
_Tea_Lover_Lv15

I love the plot, writing style, etc, and I love how, despite the bad grammar and punctuation, it is still very easy to read, at least, compared to your average webnovel book. Thank you for writing this author, you're doing great so far.

1yr
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