TruthHurtsX1000

I do love it so far. The talks between people feel ai tho. Like the math adds up statement or whatever and him being over analytical or mechanical. Ai uses certain words alot and im seeing pattern so far sadly. Ai ok but not to do all your writing

Fk yeah im so happy. My wish from my other comment came true lool

Hmmm sensing ai involved with certain wording. Like the robotic thoughts or logical over thinking and responses.

Kinda a shht chapter tbh. Nothing happened. Just fluffed to hell and back. Same details about his life and memories and all that shyt. Its been in story like 2 or 3 times already. Starting to seem very ai with all the repeat shyt

Happy Birthday. Keep up the good work i firmly believe this will be great along as quality nd uploads stay consistent

Drag9n barley fought and it needs a nap wtf is this forced shyt. This so random and dude burns city like nothing. Forced af. Idc how many ships he has dide ain't taking g city that fast even more just pirates lol

Here's my problem. So tired of authors using g names that make no sense for where mc born or realm they in or race. Dude is a devil in underworld and you name him Alex. Took 1 brain cell. Shows your lazy af or using Ai or just stolen work. Because it makes zero sense and ruins whole thing and immersion as you read. Devil Alex. Yeah sound good lmao dumb af author and writing

That name is so shyt. Like ravel riser and oth3 names and you go with Alex. Idk why author so fking lazy with names and make them the dumbest shyt that doesn't match world or where they at. Took 1 brain cell to think of that. Stupid af now

So it said to feel.thi is she never did before so she is healed. Why is she still already a robot. Should already be kinda overwhelmed lol makes n9 sense stupid af already with giant hole from get go. Seems way to forced now

Your talking out your ass. Its just forced bs to neuter the mc. Its vor8ng af and ruins mc. What's point of mc when you just override his whole persona for Travis. Its annoying g and does nothing for story. Your one of those people that say ty for the chapter and it ai trash or worst shyt written ever. Pls dont rate stories Your shyt at it