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PettiaMius_6689
PettiaMius_6689Author2yr
2023-04-28 10:23

A great story so far, the mc isn't too passive nor is he overly aggressive. He thinks about his future, but he isn't perfect. He's relatable in the choices he makes. He's extremely powerful, but not overly busted. He doesn't abuse what he's got either, all in all, the dude is okay

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SaishoMysteriarch
SaishoMysteriarchLv5

I have seen shameless reviews before but this is on a whole other level.... I approve😂.

pricefree
pricefreeLv4

Not gonna lie, your review is top tier. Absolutely hilarious and a nice change from authors giving themselves 5 stars and saying “I’m biased, give me stones!”

PettiaMius_6689
PettiaMius_6689Author

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pricefree:Not gonna lie, your review is top tier. Absolutely hilarious and a nice change from authors giving themselves 5 stars and saying “I’m biased, give me stones!”
Di_Scipline
Di_SciplineLv4

That's a new one. i like it.

PettiaMius_6689
PettiaMius_6689Author

it wasn't intended for what you think it was, just was jut trying to be funny

Di_Scipline:That's a new one. i like it.
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Psan
PsanLv6

So.... Who is his woman? Since hârêm tag is not there i suppose he chooses one of the girls or an original character. So which is it?

PettiaMius_6689
PettiaMius_6689Author

when you know bro, you know 'insert smiley face'

Psan:So.... Who is his woman? Since hârêm tag is not there i suppose he chooses one of the girls or an original character. So which is it?
Chaddts
ChaddtsLv1

I hope the other chapters have better English. The first one has straight up missing words and incorrect tense usage.

PettiaMius_6689:when you know bro, you know 'insert smiley face'
PettiaMius_6689
PettiaMius_6689Author

it gets better, ill be going over the story to recheck too, but the missing words sounds like a mobile trying to pick up special characters issue

Chaddts:I hope the other chapters have better English. The first one has straight up missing words and incorrect tense usage.
Leon_Luis_
Leon_Luis_Lv5

just tell me : Harem or No Harem.

PettiaMius_6689:when you know bro, you know 'insert smiley face'
PettiaMius_6689
PettiaMius_6689Author

if you are talking about my story then no, jut drama at best

Leon_Luis_:just tell me : Harem or No Harem.
RavenClock
RavenClockLv4

I don't mean to offend But GOD is that picture disturbing

PettiaMius_6689
PettiaMius_6689Author

hyper realism tends to do that, trust me, it'll rub off on you soon

RavenClock:I don't mean to offend But GOD is that picture disturbing
Ritesh_Jha_1696
Ritesh_Jha_1696Lv4

is it harem or not if not then who will be with mc queen or darles

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