Chaddts

Orphan trope to the max. The Mc had no family no girlfriend, and likely nothing else and was simply a big "pity me" person before reincarnation and we only learn this through flashbacks. There is quite literally nothing that makes me like the Mc in any fashion. He gets all hyped up over forcing a kiss on hinata when they are like 12 years old. And the age is another thing. The author is mentioning Naruto failing the academy twice prior, and when that was mentioned in the original, the logical fault that it causes with the ages of students was never addressed in the anime and likely won't be addressed here. Tldr. Ruined with the orphan in the past world trope. The Mc must be a common relatable person, and better yet "ADULT" their life and personality must be fleshed out so that they are relatable to readers.

Another cliche isekai without a background. It's like some kind of stupidity struck authors and they have to force all the protagonists to be orphans no matter which life. How is that believable? You want pepper to read this story yet fail in making any sort of connection with the readers when writing an ISEKAI. Truly, how can you be so lazy and to just say "orphan" and mention nothing about the Mc and their origins? How am I suppose to connect with this person when I have nothing in common with them?

Nobody normal is blocking a sword with bare skin in Naruto.

The ai is showing. Without hesitation, without hesitation, without hesitation, without hesitation, without hesitation, without hesitation. People who write their own stories, see this constant repetion and make changes to their writing. Furthermore, I didn't come here for some memory drama or anything else. All the foreshadowing of whatever annoying cliche you added for no reason is why I'm dropping this. I came here for an isekai of a normal person I can relate to, and this foreshadowing is taking that away. It was decent, good ideas but bland execution. No real conflict anywhere and kinda boring.

It's nice, but moving far too fast with many missing details that should have been addressed. So much is going unaddressed that logic is failing, particularly in the amnesia and how other characters are behaving and dialogue.

Feedback is always good.

Bait and switch. By the third chapter when the story actually begins, the person who dies and is reincarnated isn't anywhere to be seen. His body, mind, memories, everything that made him, is erased and the story becomes a Ben ten crossover where he has extra memories of marvel that somehow don't dissappear like all the other memories. Why the author decided to kill the person who was suppose to be isekai'd is beyond me, but it severs all relation and connection the readers have with the Mc. I didn't come here for a crossover story about Ben ten. I came here for an isekai and this isn't one.

Where is the isekai at? Where is the original person who died at? Memories make the man, and this is nothing but a Ben ten crossover.

The beginning quite literally has bo purpose, aside from making the Mc seem like an imbecile. Explain why I am suppose to read more. About an imbecile.

stolen story that hasn't been updated since August 22, of 2024