Chaddts

'Limited agency' isn't two choices, where one entails punishment. Its not a unique failing, other examples are easy to show. "Curses" and "heart demons" shown in cultivation novels are prime example of "forced" shoehorned in conflict, and it's too cliche for my cup of tea. Sandboxing is much better than a rail guided story.

Moreso that world building can't be graded due to it being a fanfic.

Its a fanfic, so at most it gets 3 stars. Grammar and works building is fine,and the Mc isn't terrible so far. The major issue is readily apparent, the Mc is a system slave, to include punishments for failure. He has no free will after arrival. He is forced down a narrow path, with 0 agency of his own, and very little of the needed explanations for his decisions that he could have made are not presented, leaving the reading asking, "why didn't he do this instead." That's not fun to read, at all.

I don't like the Mc he isn't relatable at all. Trying way, way too hard to be edgy and o.p and none of the back story required.

Did not hesitate... Must be written over a dozen times.

That just means they both burn faster. It's doesn't change the fact, that the body burns slower than the boat. Boats sink, and water extinguishes fire.

Logical fault with the funeral pyre on water. Its takes a lot to burn a body, the boat would sink long before the body finished burning more than the surface skin.

Ehh, the a.i and its writing Pattern is becoming obvious. Hard to ignore.

This doesn't make sense at all. The a. I has gone wacky.

Its a.I writing based on the show. Its edited, and guided to some extent, but it can't progress the cascading changes to cannon properly.