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This is incorrect. The Uchiha have yet to be pushed to the outskirts. That only happens in the wake of the nine tails incident which has yet to occur.
Too good to wait. I'm gonna have to set thus aside for a few months to binge.
Nice humor. Belly laughs are great, thanks.
This is good. I'm probably going to have to wait a bit so I can binge it.
So under-rated
Yeah, childish. More impatient than his teammate. The ages don't make sense here at all.
None of what you mention is an issue for me. It's his mindset, his expectations, and his reactions. If he was playing a character I could perhaps understand.
Criminally under-rated
Way way too slow. I'll come back in a few months.
This is supsed to be an isekai. Not a coming of age story. This entire chapter only works with children. From lens of an adult This story doesn't work at all. The character honestly doesn't feel like an adult at all. Very emotional very childish, very easily worked up. Simply fat too naive. I came here for an isekai. Not a dumb child story.