Chaddts

This is a terrible begging. One sentence says he came back as a teenager, and then another says he was five. The whole ability time travel thing, and how he achieved it is completely missing. Furthermore he doesn't go back into his own past he goes back I'm time as someone else based on the abilities he picked. This makes no sense at all.

Yeah, too cryptic. Too much is uknown. It Makes the story feel unstable, as if anything could happen at anytime. I need something concrete and stable in the story yet there isn't anything.

I have no idea where this is going, and I haven't skimmed this much useless text in my life. I'm getting secondhand depression from the Mc.

He just keeps going along with things. And it's not fun to read him being passive and the line about the weapons being backup plans over and over.

Too passive, far too passive.

Cause it is!

Orphan trope= trash not worth reading.

I'll will be skipping and holding back my votes on all chapters that has repeated explanations.for instance Michael of the fight wasn't simply shown, it was also explained afterwards for no reason. This repeated segments need to be removed entirely.

The names just ruin everything.

He was in anbu, both before and after his team assignment. He spent most of his time in anbu, isolating himself.