way too op by 15 chaps in , there's also no real end goal for MC, been just a power grind. everyone besides MC doesn't get much of a description
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it's meant to be that way, hehe. Plus didn't I say this mc was going to be op?
ye but there's op and there's OP like getting weapons and gear and getting stronger just existing is just ridiculous. Especially since the core of dragonball is usually to grind ur way to the top through sheer drive. It makes it so gaining new forms and transformations feels cool instead of them just being handed to u
I get what you're saying though, and I honestly understand, but you don't know what's coming bro, the Mc might seem powerful, but given his potential which I'm sure you have. Still, I know what I'm doing, the only reason why you are saying this is because you don't see a threat the Mc can ever take on (to lose against), which is understandable. though I'm not sure about the beginning of your point... Op is op in my book, the Mc getting stronger by just existing isn't necessarily the case either he can't do that. He trains to achieve his power which was explained in the fic, he emphasizes he could have gotten higher but he trained his transformations and other techniques, though I feel like I've nerfed him given his growth rate, meh, it is how it is. Your review in a way, is somewhat valid, but saying he is too op, in a fanfic that the Mc is made to be op is a little, redundant. I hope I don't come across as disrespectful though, but I know your rating will change in the future. So I won't worry much
