I saw this book on the free limited day read and decided to give it a chance. Seriously, what a mistake that was. The old Spiderman saying, with great power comes great responsibility, or the one that goes that power corrupts etc, is very much the whole of this book. MC receives the system, aka All of Creation, and with that comes the ability to do anything he can imagine. So when depressed shutin MC receives the gift, he goes nuclear and from there the story plummets to a wish fantasy. Protect his parents because he f*#ked up first time round, becomes number one priority. Girls are fun, but hmm how they can be useful to me besides a relief tool. He has no emotional balance of life and that is how the story goes. I did my best to give this a story a go as it was free for the chapters but I couldn’t stomach the narcissistic, low EQ MC any further and pulled the pin. Just my opinion for all the above.
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It's good you think like that, but this isn't the place to write that.You can write it as a chapter comment or just any comment, but not in the review.There are readers who enjoy this **** and it'd be an insult to them and the author.This is my first book, so don't know what you were expecting. The synopsis is also there. Maybe read it before a work like this spoils your mood.Now you just chased away readers who would've enjoyed this work. And even if they don't,... Anyway, if you don't like a work, just leave it. Don't stain the review section. My newbie heart can't take it
Apart where you put this, the breakdown is pretty... Helpful. Look at my other works.Maybe your input will make them better than this one
Well I did read the synopsis and my thoughts were that it maybe interesting and so I had a read of the book. My comment is a review so it is in the right spot. I also added that this was my own opinion and no one elses. Your point that others may enjoy the genre is taken however i just could not find a common thread to emphasise with your MC as (again my opinion) I like a bit of humanity and all that was revealed was his revelling in unlimited power to to detriment of his LIs. To be honest, and I fairly scored (the stars) each section as I believed. Your writing quality, world building, updating is exceptional and so I scored it high. I rated low the character and story development as it was where I felt the problem (for me lay). Even though it is your first novel I wouldn’t want to restrict your growth so sometimes you need to take negative comments with the intent to improve or consider how to capture all tastes. I will also take your advice and look at your other novels and see how they are. But anyways, thanks for your views 👍
mobisa:It's good you think like that, but this isn't the place to write that.You can write it as a chapter comment or just any comment, but not in the review.There are readers who enjoy this **** and it'd be an insult to them and the author.This is my first book, so don't know what you were expecting. The synopsis is also there. Maybe read it before a work like this spoils your mood.Now you just chased away readers who would've enjoyed this work. And even if they don't,... Anyway, if you don't like a work, just leave it. Don't stain the review section. My newbie heart can't take it
That was childish of me (blush). Anyway thanks for the review and your view and advice were pretty spot on.
Anytime 👍 And I did read I think, two of your other novels. They were pretty ok and I left chapter comments here and there. Keep it up 😁
mobisa:That was childish of me (blush). Anyway thanks for the review and your view and advice were pretty spot on.
