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mobisa
mobisaAuthor2yr
2023-05-09 14:35

Hello, messed up and locked chapters too early but too late to do anything about it. To make sure you get what you pay for, I would urge you to comment on your likes and dislikes. Tell me your thought on what you think I should add or remove. This is a novel that will cover a universe. Anything goes. If you want me to add something, just write it in the comments and I'll add it. Be more active, it helps me write better

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Danni11
Danni11Lv11

Will it have romance? I didn't see the tag 🤔

Danni11
Danni11Lv11

Why did you delete the message? :v

Danni11:Will it have romance? I didn't see the tag 🤔
chapp1e
chapp1eLv4

pls just make sure you see it to the end and don't drop the novel🙏.We will be with you till the end 🧘

A7_Movie_House
A7_Movie_HouseLv4

more free chapters

mathos_01
mathos_01Lv1

it isnt possible to have more free chapters? please

mobisa
mobisaAuthor

Once locked, it's impossible to change

Raven_guard_2192
Raven_guard_2192Lv14

did you publish the novel anywhere else?

mobisa:Once locked, it's impossible to change
mobisa
mobisaAuthor

Nop, its exclusive

Raven_guard_2192:did you publish the novel anywhere else?
T_O_K_Y_O
T_O_K_Y_OLv4

romance?

mudasir_ahmad
mudasir_ahmadLv3

did you drop it?

mobisa
mobisaAuthor

U finished reading? Am having trouble ending this book. It has so much potential but can't see the way forward. Thinking I should complete it then post some more chapters as side stories. What do you think

mudasir_ahmad:did you drop it?
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Ultimate_Boss
Ultimate_BossLv12

Although late the beginning of the novel isn’t really ok the MC is given an op system with the situation being that the only threat to him are lvl 99 and max lvl beings. Him saying that he wants to create a force then proceeding to attemp to take over the world does not match the level of his system cuz the fog he put up will eventually attract the attention of powerful beings because it’s range is large there are other things about the story that don’t match the level of the system or just spoil the story line I’m just to lazy to type but as the writer you’ll probably understand what I mean from what I type next You could have solved a lot of problems about how the plot would be by making him unable to use the system on himself then just give him the undying skill, his lvl ten mortal body, cultivation techniques, stealth techniques and other skills to make him strong but not to strong that you have to force the Mc to make a dumb choice to create plot Next make the world a hidden cultivators society, tower or any supernatural type world, whatever you like(I haven’t read far enough to confirm if this novel is like that but I just felt that this novel could have been a lot better) This novel in the beginning is basically you giving an adult a nuclear missle level weapon and having him fight kids You made the MC out to be a person anxious to protect his parents after losing them once but yet he was willing to give up a chance to quickly become powerful despite knowing there are beings his system created fog can’t block Well this is just my own opinion and I’m not trying to attack? You

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