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Quake_Midaro
Quake_MidaroLv141yr
2024-01-25 07:52

Do not read unless you like forced plot points constant death threats and forced relationships this fic is worthless garbage and it just keeps getting worse it's good up until Ch.70-ish then it plummets and keeps getting worse honestly not sure how the author even got to Ch.300+ of this waste of time it's trash

Fairy Tail: Metal and Threads

SixthSense1029
4.6
725 Chs

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SixthSense1029
SixthSense1029Author

I'm just curious, but exactly how far into the story did you get before you wrote this review?

1yr
Quake_Midaro
Quake_MidaroLv14

Ch.137 was the last I read

SixthSense1029:I'm just curious, but exactly how far into the story did you get before you wrote this review?
1yr
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SixthSense1029
SixthSense1029Author

Cool, thanks for letting me know.

Quake_Midaro:Ch.137 was the last I read
1yr
The_writer8888
The_writer8888Lv4

You could fix this so easily, rewrite the sun arc. You had Cana, and erza and elicia wait forever to join the harem, then all of a sudden you introduce 2 new members instantly. And then you have him lose his arm for no conceivable reason, and worst of all, no one reacts to his lost arm besides UR. From the first 70 chapters it’s clear you can do SOOO much better man

SixthSense1029:Cool, thanks for letting me know.
1yr
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The stories of this author are quite interesting. Although I hope that in this work there will not be a harem, as in DxD. Too many girls, it's absurd. (More than 5 and the story becomes feces)

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Reveal spoiler

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it's a good fanfic I can see it becoming amazing in the future although I am hoping for no harem as that would work better for Alfonzo and Elicia as they both have had a past and Alfonzo with his personality would get arrogant if he had more than one girl and he should stay loyal to Elicia as she has been loyal to him

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lbaro97
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This is a very well-written story. The pacing is very good in my opinion and it is worth giving it a try. However, as of chapter 72 I will now not continue to read the story because I can now see what the crossover aspects are going to be like. It seems the crossovers will only introduce new Harem additions. I am already not a fan of Harem stories because the introduction of a Harem always results in two dimensional and forced relationships. This story is good enough that I could ignore the Harem elements. However, with the introduction of a crossover harem, it has just become too much. Which is honestly sad, because the story doesn't need Harem and crossover elements. It is already great without them. It would be, in fact, better without them. For the author, I can only recommend to rethink the harem and crossover aspects. For the potential readers, I recommend that you try this story. Form your own opinion on it.

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djmac76
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It is a decent story however after chapter 70 I lost complete interest. I had hoped for a Fairy Tail fanfic strictly in that universe, but the AU elements to the story ruined it.

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Abashelkoolhem_399
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Author, I really like your DxD ff and this ff is also really good and I enjoy reading it so far, hope you keep this up! Waiting for more chapters - 5 stars

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ACHILLES
ACHILLESLv4

Hate the characters personalitt mc doesn't have an spine and thats all im gonna explain too annoyed to say more.

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Lets hope this is better than cherry blossoms DxD novel you wrote... It was good until the Dark Martial Arts tournament where quality dropped to the underworld. I also hope you dont rushedEND/Axe this one

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