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2024-03-13 03:56

It was really good, the story was satisfying and it was a fun read. Up until chapter 70ish, when he randomly started introducing characters from other anime, without really any consideration on how the world affects things. It all feels incredibly forced, unsatisfying and overall stupid. He went from meaningful relationships and characters to forcing characters he likes into the harem, and it’s destroyed the characters and the harem in one fall swoop. And seeing as he didn’t really having anything going for the story besides characters and mainly harem, there isn’t any desire for me to read beyond hoping Sun and Marin somehow get written out of existence. I honestly just feel disgusted with how forced it feels now. Why would an S-class wizard follow mermaid law. Why is the mermaid law even a thing in fairy tail, where and I’m quoting several other people, where gods and dragons and mythical creatures exist on the daily. It’s just so bad and meaningless now

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