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Cookiecutter56
Cookiecutter56Lv42yr
2023-04-20 01:06

I really enjoyed 1st 40 chapters . But the recurrent transphobia becomes apparent after this , It's a shame I really like the MC but just fell very uncomfortable reading about his supposed hatred for Homophilia

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BoredCrow
BoredCrowLv4

when did this happen btw from what im reading i haven't seen that for a long time

BoredCrow
BoredCrowLv4

Bro it hasn't happened for a long time the story is normal rn

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ScarletQC
ScarletQCLv14

Wow, just how much of a little flower can you be.

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Simoncso
SimoncsoLv11

It’ s not about being a little flower, but why should I read a fanfic written by a bigot in 2023?

ScarletQC:Wow, just how much of a little flower can you be.
ScarletQC
ScarletQCLv14

Exactly, silently leave if you don’t like it like everyone does. And, everyone is getting more and more of a puss puss in 2023.

Simoncso:It’ s not about being a little flower, but why should I read a fanfic written by a bigot in 2023?
HeavenShakingIdiot
HeavenShakingIdiotLv14

Would you say this does not happen in real life? I am assuming you're referring to them calling each other fa***t. It's a military institution in a backass world, if anything, it is realistic. It's part of their speech. I mean it's like something happening and people saying "that's so gay," that does not mean someone is homophobic. People need to stop getting offended by what is not meant as offence.

Simoncso:It’ s not about being a little flower, but why should I read a fanfic written by a bigot in 2023?
Jantipopo
JantipopoLv14

huh? bruh did you read the synopsis ?

Cookiecutter56
Cookiecutter56Lv4

Homophobia has no place irrespective of synopsis , You can't justify the novel being homophobic by "didn't you read synopsis" are you freaking mental .

Jantipopo:huh? bruh did you read the synopsis ?
Jantipopo
JantipopoLv14

you've been warned and you still proceed now you mad? bruh stay mad, gay is disgusting.

Cookiecutter56:Homophobia has no place irrespective of synopsis , You can't justify the novel being homophobic by "didn't you read synopsis" are you freaking mental .
Cookiecutter56
Cookiecutter56Lv4

and what do you mean by warned , Homophobia is blight it cannot be allowed to exist ,It's on par with racism .

Jantipopo:you've been warned and you still proceed now you mad? bruh stay mad, gay is disgusting.
Cookiecutter56
Cookiecutter56Lv4

That's a fact ,It's common sense . Sexuality is extremely personal affair a person can be whatever they want , Homophobia is evil it's hating someone for being different than you . That's not what I think that's a fact . Racism is hating someone for being different than you . If you can't identify this similarity you should go back to school

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Jantipopo
JantipopoLv14

it's a made up fact by you. sexuality is personal? now that's fact, but others still can judge, you're not alone in this world. A person can be whatever they want? that's bs, that's basically what those who pretend to change sexuality everyday is saying. Racism is prejudice and discrimination based on RACIAL , now that's evil. Gay hate is based on their act

Cookiecutter56:That's a fact ,It's common sense . Sexuality is extremely personal affair a person can be whatever they want , Homophobia is evil it's hating someone for being different than you . That's not what I think that's a fact . Racism is hating someone for being different than you . If you can't identify this similarity you should go back to school
Kenji_Shimura
Kenji_ShimuraLv4

wait gay is disgusting? bruh self reported

Jantipopo:you've been warned and you still proceed now you mad? bruh stay mad, gay is disgusting.
Kenji_Shimura
Kenji_ShimuraLv4

what do you mean gay hate is based on their actions? IDK if the author really is a homophobe but your definitely one

Jantipopo:it's a made up fact by you. sexuality is personal? now that's fact, but others still can judge, you're not alone in this world. A person can be whatever they want? that's bs, that's basically what those who pretend to change sexuality everyday is saying. Racism is prejudice and discrimination based on RACIAL , now that's evil. Gay hate is based on their act
Random_exe
Random_exeLv13

I find gay acts to be disgusting , just thinking about sword fighting makes me wanna throw up , am i homophob ? 🤔

Kenji_Shimura:what do you mean gay hate is based on their actions? IDK if the author really is a homophobe but your definitely one
Kenji_Shimura
Kenji_ShimuraLv4

theres nothing wrong with not liking gay acts as long as you dont hate gays

Random_exe:I find gay acts to be disgusting , just thinking about sword fighting makes me wanna throw up , am i homophob ? 🤔
jayjay_123
jayjay_123Lv13

Go and cry about it

Simoncso:It’ s not about being a little flower, but why should I read a fanfic written by a bigot in 2023?
jayjay_123
jayjay_123Lv13

Facts…lol that person is definitely a feminist and sheep supporter of whatever’s trending

ScarletQC:Exactly, silently leave if you don’t like it like everyone does. And, everyone is getting more and more of a puss puss in 2023.
jayjay_123
jayjay_123Lv13

No, you can dislike gay ”acts” just don’ hate the people….it’s equivalent to seeing someone eating way too much food and finding it disgusting, it’s fine to think that them eating too much is disgusting, but don’t hate the person though…

Random_exe:I find gay acts to be disgusting , just thinking about sword fighting makes me wanna throw up , am i homophob ? 🤔
Random_exe
Random_exeLv13

Meh i dont really have time in my life to go hate on another person irrelevant to me , i just hate gay acts find them to be disgusting to the degree i would stop being around a friend if he came out gay

jayjay_123:No, you can dislike gay ”acts” just don’ hate the people….it’s equivalent to seeing someone eating way too much food and finding it disgusting, it’s fine to think that them eating too much is disgusting, but don’t hate the person though…
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