Writing Quality: Good grammar and spacing no noticeable errors which is good. Honestly the author really flushes out the story well, of course the time skips are really big, and it is fine, considering that the timeline take places during the Rock Pirate Era, which I am perfectly fine with. The MC is someone who is cold, due to his traumatic experience with pirates, which is well written and of course he joins the marines and how the author does it make his character so flushed out. I like how the author also really show his ideology and how he reacts in certain situations which help explore the MC emotional trauma even more. What I wished the author would do more though is for the MC to hang out with his love ones more, I know he is cold, but I want more wholesome scenes at times. Other than that the story is really well written that it feels like it could be a side story or cannon. It fits the One Piece world so well in my personal opinion. Story Development: Really fast story development, the time line go by so fast in my personal opinion, but we get to see a lot of growth of the characters which I really do like. His character development is amazing in my personal opinion from someone who is obsessed at killing pirates from his tragedy as a child to someone who is obsessed with justice and the flaws of the World Government. How the author does it makes me wanna keep reading. Character Design: Obviously we are gonna have some good old one piece design but I wished we have an image of our MC, I might have missed it but yeah nothing much to say other than one piece. Updating Stability: It updates fine, honestly the updates is one of the good things about this novel. World Background: It is One Piece the world is about freedom, tragedy, death, and love. What world is more open and have its secret like one piece. Summary: This novel is amazing overall, I wish it could have more wholesome moments in the novel, like the MC with his daughter of granddaughter. I also want a bit more lore or action in the story. As it feels a bit too fast pace but I am all for it. Other than that, it is a good novel and I would reread it again!
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LIKEAlso before reading, there are warnings in regards when starting the book, there will homophobia, while I do not judge the author belief and would disagree on the part where he include tons of homophobic words that I feel are unnessary. I judge the novel on what it is, a novel I do not include my own personal beliefs on the novel, I only include whether it is a good read or not. So far it has been a good read. But the author needs to tone it down at times, I know it is supposed to be a Dark Series but, sometimes there can be limits. Other than that, keep writing, keep dreaming, and adieu!
Same thoughts my friend but this is just how Galan's character is. Although I too want some wholesome scenes but it doesn't really fit in with the type of novel it is so I'm just content with Olvia and Galan's interactions (only oliva cuz Galan feels like sasuke when with oliva and edgy emo hahahahah feels nice) and sometimes the call with his subordinates too.
