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Miracle_invoker_
Miracle_invoker_Lv32yr
2023-04-19 00:42

A little rushed at first, especially the arc in the valley of the gods. He also says there are stronger people than him, I doubt it very much. In 1c1 he is definitely the strongest in the world by far. Otherwise I like the romance with Nico Olivia, even though it's hard to get him to come out of his shell, but I trust that she will! I'm currently on chapter 75, and it's a perfect I'm also looking forward to him going for a "rematch" against kaido.

One Piece: Injustice Corrected

AgentMonke
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AgentMonke
AgentMonkeAuthor

Have to say, I still believe Garp is stronger... Something about that Galaxy Fist... Sheesh.

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Miracle_invoker_
Miracle_invoker_Lv3

Do you realize that he literally has the strongest fists in the world? To hit a sea rock, just with his bare fists, is incredible. I doubt Garp could do it. There is no doubt that Garp is in the top 5 strongest in the world, along with Roger, Rocks, Edward and our protagonist. But I still think he is weaker than our protagonist whose name I forgot...

AgentMonke:Have to say, I still believe Garp is stronger... Something about that Galaxy Fist... Sheesh.
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AgentMonke
AgentMonkeAuthor

its fine you dont need to remember his name thats the point of the story hes not a person and hmmm idk man i think garp could do it! we just need to wait and see the damage of galaxy fist... thats also years and years of punching in the same spot over and over again hundreds of thousands maybe even millions of times in the exact same spot with a tremendous force you have to take into account the structural integrity of the seastone how many times can it be hit before breaking.

Miracle_invoker_:Do you realize that he literally has the strongest fists in the world? To hit a sea rock, just with his bare fists, is incredible. I doubt Garp could do it. There is no doubt that Garp is in the top 5 strongest in the world, along with Roger, Rocks, Edward and our protagonist. But I still think he is weaker than our protagonist whose name I forgot...
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