The idea has been used before with a template system and bleach powers in Naruto but the key part of this fic that’s good is using a character no one uses and having great world background. Explains mcs past slightly and solidify puts him in the fanfic. Fic is interesting too. Now onto the list of problems. The MC is supposed to be 100 years old and yet he acts like a spoiled kid. The author is trying to write the mc as if he’s Yamato but doesn’t grasp yamatos personality properly. Instead the MC now acts as an overbearing grandpa with absolutely no wisdom at all, like none. One chapter it talked about him fighting for something pointless and immediately went full powered with Tsunade next to him who happened to be a kid. Author also got the Bleach power levels wrong entirely as if he had even a fraction of Yamatos power he would kill everyone around him by just breathing, that’s why in Bleach everything is in the spiritual world and not physical.
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LIKEStill a good fic but has very noticeable issues in it. The writing itself is good just forgets some important bits to bring it up to really good
but not gonna lie despite all the mistakes the author have made this is still a lot better than other fanfics. maybe the author would rectify the errors he is still in the early chaps after all.
Agreed. Yamamoto is basically the coldest-blooded commander of gotei 13 and not only that, he's the founder and still the defacto leader of the said org after couple of changing era.
Also don't forget every Uzumaki Clan also have their own kekkai genkai. The author never talk about it in the novel. Also as a member the Uzumaki Clan Shouldn't the mc has that kekkai genkai?
Not all Uzumaki had one.
