I’m being honest the writing is bad, and as much as I want to be nice about it I can’t. There’s no plot, things just randomly happen, and there’s no build up to anything. The idea itself is good and can be improved upon, but tbh this needs some grammatical checks and fixing.

Good stuff, it would be cool if you explore more on the Vex side of stuff in the future, could have really cool timeskips/reversals. Also their tech just cool

So she has like Tracers ability from overwatch?

Good stuff keep it up

This was really good, you did a great job getting down how broke the Vex are. I’m curious to see in the future the Ahamkara vs the Vex, reality warp vs time. Keep up the good work.

Good stuff vex have always been a fav fictional enemy, would love to see more of them as tbh, they are just broken beyond reason

Solid 4 star, it’s good and I like the idea but there’s some issues with going into details and character interactions. Still good, just can use some more details and sprucing up with dialogue.

Same thing as my webnovel name, haven’t been too active there either and only have one active fic at the moment for Rwby, but I will be more active there than here probably

Thx for sticking this long!

When I do feel motiv for this fic again, I will probably end up dealing with the soul merge by just using author powers to get rid of it

Ah thank you for the good luck picture

Yeah nah Rwby and DC had a certified crossover, and there’s apparently a cannon time difference between the two, something like a day on dc is two weeks in remnant

I might, tbh I gotta find my old spark for this fic. If I do I will def consider this.

I def might do that, will have to research up a bit. That or maybe do a story I was thinking of Pyrrha from RWBY in DC, as its confirmed there was a crossover between the two.

Thx for staying so long!

So to summarize for peeps, this aint dropped, but it aint continued either. IDK how it will pan out, if I will get any ideas over the summer, but ill let yall know. But! Do expect some other fics to be updated by me! This one just hard as its been so long and idk how I feel about it yet.

Feel like this is setting up perfectly for him to get with Esdeath if she can out bid the army

I got one in the works but won’t be out for a month cuz I’m busy fin up college, will be updating fanfic and this account then

Tbh I clicked on this as I like the character and idea, especially because it’s yuri. Main issue is that it’s just not my cup of tea as it’s a heavy system fic with massive progression. It’s not bad, and a lot of people will enjoy it, but I feel like it progresses way too quickly. The mc is getting really OP powers like no tomorrow, where instead there should be some chapters of her just building her current powers. The system is called street level system, but a lot of the people are super OP in their own rights. It’s good just too fast and OP for me.

I’m being honest it’s a great idea, and authors doing great for starting out. Issue is that this just completely neither fits SCP or the Lich. Mc is freely letting the foundation nerf him, and the foundation is acting nothing like it would. The Mc is too naive and doesn’t fit the Lich persona either, I feel like it would’ve been better to have the actual lich of an evil mc fill the role. For the author you gotta remember the Lich persona when writing, and that SCP is prob the most cruel gulag ever. If they found the Lich they would lock him up until the sun blows up, and would never let any reality bender live either.