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_The_Shady_
_The_Shady_Lv41yr
2023-05-15 13:29

The Character design as well as the traits are good, the progression of the story is decent but the only problem I have with this fic is the writing. From chapter 1 the writing doesn't feel smooth, the narration is weird like"i did this, i found this, i learned this" along with no info given about the background where he is living, no details about the place he lives, his social interaction with other people are not smooth etc. But overall the story is good.

In Against the Gods with Extreme Traits

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