I slightly agree with the first one as I did remove some facts from the original novel. AS for Modern Science, Please don't about that in cultivation novel, their world has different laws. As for the last part, I don't write because no one reads that past history dump or another info dump. I myself skip most of the dumps. But if all want to read, You can tell me, and I can explain the events completely.

Maybe you yourself did not read what you wrote, but I, for example, simply do not believe that his students were able to pass the divine tests. And if the reader does not believe what is written, this is a very bad sign.

Maybe you yourself did not read what you wrote, but I, for example, simply do not believe that his students were able to pass the divine tests. And if the reader does not believe what is written, this is a very bad sign.

The divine tests, why wouldn't they pass? I can understand you think Yun Che passed only because he had Fire Seed for Phoenix one. I mean he has been training them to pass the exam. He had been training Lan Xi for the fire trial with Dragons' help and tempering her every day and made her master Spear Intent and archery to take care of 2nd trial. As for the third one, it was easy for her. The same with Lin Feng. He had been making his body strong so he could work even without energy. I mean he had to deal mostly with quantity.

Both can read minds, he couldn't prepare them for the third test, and what was the dragon's third test?

Heart Trial. Phoenix's First test was related to managing Heat (in simpler terms), he made her resistant to Emperor Profound Dragon. The second test was running from arrows or destroying them, and the third one was the heart trial. For Dragon Legacy, the first one was a trial about stone warriors, leaving one and then recharging. The second one was hunting the beast, he left them in the Mountain range, and the third one was a heart trial or Pride

I know what was in the original, but the third dragon's test was situational. What was his?

Same, Killing Long Chen to have her mother back and giving ruling positions. Dragons are Righteous creatures and if killed him, he would fail. All he had to was refuse the position.

Not a very good test. Maybe you can try to start over? If you want to make him strong enough this fast, you're going to have to use your brains because it's very annoying to read right now. If I were you, I would play on his strong adaptability, since the main problem with drugs is that they leave impurities in the body, but with proper preparation, he could swallow quite a lot of pills, and also, he can quickly stroke 50 kilograms of crystals on the same reason. You don't have to constantly break the rules of the world like you did with the gate or the pearl or everything else. It also makes no sense to send him 2 years into the past, since everyone likes Jasmine and there is nothing wrong with having her around. I understand that you want him to show off in front of her, but it's not worth it. Try not to add unfamiliar elements like seals to the story because it interferes with immersion, but rather use what already exists. If you don't want to be part of the blue star plot, then you should probably have him be born in the star god realm or Brahma and help Jasmine escape to the blue star, then it would make sense to do such an accelerated research. Students in general are not bad, but you didn’t reveal them at all, so they only get in the way and it’s not clear why they are needed at all. Again, the pearl idea was very bad, especially since he had not yet used it and could already collect a complete original from another continent. Also, in addition to facts, try to describe the feelings, expressions and environment of the characters. Tell us what the hotel looks like, what its students look like, what kind of characters they have. Try to describe the weather, nature and architecture of new places. And please think more about the dialogue because it sounds stupid, try to put yourself in the place of the character.