My rating for this novel is very disappointing. For the first chapter, I really liked the character development, but why did MC suddenly meet the mother of the child who was attacked by bandits and destroyed everything? Are you trying to come up with a plot for his minions that I find so absurd. For renewal it's good but that's how the story starts to fall apart. Thank You!!
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