Read Till (265 ch/ 360+) Bad things about the novel (since the good points were already covered by others): Terrible choice of female leads. The author seems to have a netorase fetish... 🤮 The main character lacks masculinity. He isn't possessive enough, he willingly films kissing and nude scenes of his girlfriend despite having the power to erase them. Now for the "what if factor," the reason I even bothered to read this novel: it's essentially just piracy. The protagonist isn't someone trying to make meaningful changes. He's ambitious but ultimately cowardly. From my perspective, he’s just all talk and no action. There’s also too much narration and barely any dialogue. In some chapters, the author drones on and on without a break.Too much yapping.. Lack of descriptive writing: Personally, I’m a fan of sensory and atmospheric details, but this novel seriously lacks them. Lack of world-building: I know some readers might disagree, but I felt the world-building was insufficient and underwhelming. The protagonist is foolish when it comes to choosing a life partner. Right now, his girlfriend is someone who was previously married, and I dislike Mylf which is a major reason why this story doesn’t work for me. The main issue, however, is that the story has become boring. The central "what if" premise has been forgotten. The protagonist hasn't changed anything he's just become like the very people he was supposed to defy. Lastly, I preferred Reese Witherspoon more, and Jessica was also a good choice, but instead, the protagonist chose to being a dishwasher. Despite all these flaws, I can’t bring myself to give this one star, especially since I genuinely enjoyed it at the beginning. I’m giving it three stars, and that’s me being generous. Good luck to the author.
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