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Mister_Robot
Mister_RobotLv47mth
2024-10-05 14:40

It's a great attempt by the author. It's hard to believe they started learning English grammar at 18. They should be proud of themself for coming so far. I envy and appreciate such dedicated and talented ppl. That being said, the plot of this story is quite good and I don't have any complaints regarding grammar. What's offputting to me is the Main character. He's such an unlikable and irritating person. He keeps repeating how scared he is of women after his ex wife cheated on him and tried to ruin his life, yet he doesn't stop simping. I don't like harem but it would make more sense if he had casual flings and one night stands instead of clinging on to Reese Witherspoon and reminding the readers how he's intimidated by a relationship with a woman. Make him gay instead or asexual but ffs stop repeating the same thing. I love how the mc swims against the tides to complete his films and make them successful, however the story always is a stalemate when he turns into a simp.

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LastGod
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MC seems like a sleezy grease ball. overweight untalented loser. Hes using other peoples talent to get ahead and most likely will screw up and ruin it at some point. the ONLY thing that i can say he has going for him is he is hard working. But the whole feel of the novel is sleazy like i need a shower. not fun and cool excited to see him become famous.

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MARLENE_ANGEL
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AUTHOR THIS NOVEL IS FUN, IF IT WAS NOT FUN WHY THESE MORONS ARE HERE. LOVE THE CHEMISTRY BETWEEN HI AND ANGELINA JOLIE..SHE NEEDS TO BE CERTER WIFE FOR MC AND THIS NOVLE CAN GO FART 3000 CHAPTERS IF YOU DO NOT QUIT. CMON THIS IS FUN NO BS THANK YOU.

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Luicfer_2807
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Keep it up. Nice Work man. Write more chapters so your novel can be found in the fan fiction section. I think it is going to be a great story.

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My first review. This story is really good. In it, the Protagonist really goes through the hard way to make a good film. This is also not about dependence on the system because it does not exist.The man just returned to the Past and works on films himself without anyone's help. One of my favorite works at the moment. If something is written by a translator because it is weak in English (

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Kancha_T
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Brilliant. What makes a story good? The grammar and it's pacing and you've written both very well. I love what you're doing with the story and can't wait to see where this goes.

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👏👏👏👏🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🤩🤩🤩🤩great novel far better than any Hollywood fanfiction out there if u r in search of Hollywood fanfiction this is very good 👍👍😊😊

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This has potential. Continue.

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worth the ride .keep it up and plz don't drop and need more chapters

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