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Archonstine
ArchonstineLv51yr
2023-11-07 17:37

It's bad, as in really bad. It could be so much better if the author fixed his diction, syntax, and overall tone of the novel. Also the plot makes no sense, it's extremely unrealistic. But hey, at least it updates every day.

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pujimaki
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Archonstine
ArchonstineLv5

no offence buddy, I'll still read it everyday, but even you gotta admit, the flaws are plenty.

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nevershe
neversheLv11

better than yours.

joc_2086
joc_2086Lv14

No need to hate on an honest and useful review, and it’s not better than his fic, the writing in Snakes and Ladders is clearly much better and it’s much more realistic

nevershe:better than yours.
Archonstine
ArchonstineLv5

Thanks bruh, Appreciate it.

joc_2086:No need to hate on an honest and useful review, and it’s not better than his fic, the writing in Snakes and Ladders is clearly much better and it’s much more realistic
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