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Taragorm
TaragormLv12yr
2023-04-07 06:17

I got to chapter 4 and i had to drop its a brillant idea but author you fluffed it the mcs background is awesome the idea of bloodline reincarnations is great but you just ignore it the mc should be jaded op and wise dudes had thousands of lives from cave man days and he just lets a housekeeper slap him it makes zero sense. hes weak doesnt know magic doesnt know how to protect his mind. it ruins the whole thing.

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LazyCaveman
LazyCavemanAuthor

Im sorry you feel that way, but if you would’ve actually read the next few chapters you would’ve realized why that was at the begining. I didnt what to info dump at the start of the novel so i spread it out. If you feel like coming back to it then great but if not then I’m sorry

SirSquirtsALot
SirSquirtsALotLv1

Maybe if you actually read through the rest of it instead of dropping at such an early chapter you would’ve seen that all of that was explained

Taragorm
TaragormLv1

Explaining why something is doesn't change what it is. unfortunately what it is, is a waste it such an awesome idea of blood reincarnations well written but not using it as character development and using some bs that i guess is some magic and soul mumbo jumbo to explain it away is like taking a dump on a pile of gold this could of been

SirSquirtsALot:Maybe if you actually read through the rest of it instead of dropping at such an early chapter you would’ve seen that all of that was explained
LazyCaveman
LazyCavemanAuthor

Well I’m sorry you feel like that, I wish you good luck on your endeavors

Taragorm:Explaining why something is doesn't change what it is. unfortunately what it is, is a waste it such an awesome idea of blood reincarnations well written but not using it as character development and using some bs that i guess is some magic and soul mumbo jumbo to explain it away is like taking a dump on a pile of gold this could of been
Taragorm
TaragormLv1

Honestly im not hoping to come across insulting or demeaning just honestly in my opinion find it a waste of character story potential peace

LazyCaveman:Well I’m sorry you feel like that, I wish you good luck on your endeavors
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ErozothDraeor
ErozothDraeorLv6

Agreed, I will spare another review but this was my comment: "Yea, the authors excuse just doesn't cut it. There are families less than a hundred years with no magic that control a lot of the world, his couldn't do it? How long did he live each time? With magic it should have been 100 plus years, at minimum. Not like any mortal can threaten him if took down a proper dragon alone. Lived since 100k bc but hears this world is the same HP world and its exciting? Please, that is a joke. He would have met, and fought, so many dark lords or generally bad people at his time, Voldy would look like just another piece of grass to be cut off and move on. Learn new magic? He probably (logically) invented most or many spells. You can't tell me his imagination and previous knowledge would not have helped him invent things before others. He could be a psychopath and he would still set his family, with many safeties (against outside threat or from stupid descendants) to ensure he has something next time. Is he just stupid and never had ambition to set his family, securely, with redundancies, at the peak or is this just another cliche origin story that has no impact on the world? Completely made up to hype the MC and then under deliver? Seems so. Or more likely the author just didn't spend the 3 minutes it took me to consider what it would really mean to live that long: The resources, the knowledge, the pride\arrogance\eg (depending on the descendants)."

Taragorm
TaragormLv1

100% agree. the idea so good could have gone such an awesome way with it.

ErozothDraeor:Agreed, I will spare another review but this was my comment: "Yea, the authors excuse just doesn't cut it. There are families less than a hundred years with no magic that control a lot of the world, his couldn't do it? How long did he live each time? With magic it should have been 100 plus years, at minimum. Not like any mortal can threaten him if took down a proper dragon alone. Lived since 100k bc but hears this world is the same HP world and its exciting? Please, that is a joke. He would have met, and fought, so many dark lords or generally bad people at his time, Voldy would look like just another piece of grass to be cut off and move on. Learn new magic? He probably (logically) invented most or many spells. You can't tell me his imagination and previous knowledge would not have helped him invent things before others. He could be a psychopath and he would still set his family, with many safeties (against outside threat or from stupid descendants) to ensure he has something next time. Is he just stupid and never had ambition to set his family, securely, with redundancies, at the peak or is this just another cliche origin story that has no impact on the world? Completely made up to hype the MC and then under deliver? Seems so. Or more likely the author just didn't spend the 3 minutes it took me to consider what it would really mean to live that long: The resources, the knowledge, the pride\arrogance\eg (depending on the descendants)."
The_Eldritch_Troll
The_Eldritch_TrollLv4

What don’t you get about being in the body of a child counteracting thousands of years of experience… not gonna lie seems like the author made things up as he went along so that he could fill some plot holes but in doing so he got rid of any common sense.

Taragorm:Explaining why something is doesn't change what it is. unfortunately what it is, is a waste it such an awesome idea of blood reincarnations well written but not using it as character development and using some bs that i guess is some magic and soul mumbo jumbo to explain it away is like taking a dump on a pile of gold this could of been
Humbuub
HumbuubLv5

I think he doesn't need an explanation, but more of, some events shouldn't've happened in the first place.

LazyCaveman:Im sorry you feel that way, but if you would’ve actually read the next few chapters you would’ve realized why that was at the begining. I didnt what to info dump at the start of the novel so i spread it out. If you feel like coming back to it then great but if not then I’m sorry
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