Taragorm

11 year old girl. I have gone from liking the mc to hating his guts out in one chapter. I'm out here definitely a good read though.

Mcs got gold got plenty of money.

Waste of digital paper chapter nothing happens, they get scared from noise of mc fighting then will goes take a look . That's the chapter in a sentence saves time. Jokes aside enjoying the fanfic 5 stars so far

£1 shop now that's a relic of a bygone age

I can't take the description gore anymore I don't need to know how everything looks in excruciating detail. I'm out.

What a absolute waste of air the whole chapter is a nothing burger. Dude looks at a goat and deliberates that the poison was intentional like the fact It was in the wine wasn't obvious enough. A time thief chapter. I like the story so far just calling out a bad chapter not a bad story at least so far.

I really wanted to like this the lore accurate lotr elf in westeros is awesome idea. But jesus christ is this awful, whatever ai you used is overdiscriptive making reading it physically painful. Basically leaving nothing for the reader to picture in there own mind. The inconsistencies are stupid to the extreme bran falling cersei and Jamie being in winter fell just straight up outta goddamn nowhere. where's the king or his camp followers in the previous chapters. the whole 3rd chapter is just A-Grade clanker word salad. Its all lazy and just straight up a waste. I'm salty as hell because this could be bloody awesome if it was done right or above average if the use of ai was done as a tool rather than a author replacement. sorry for the rant love the idea. There's something great here please someone have a proper go at this idea. I honestly don't get why people keep posting ai novels here of this quality the ai is right there easy to use readers can use prompts themselves stop poisoning the lake please.

I hate authors who use ai as a replacement rather than a tool. I understand how people are getting super salty over it because webnovel is getting flooded with aislop where the authors haven't had the basic decency to proof read and edit out the ai brain rot but there are a few who use ai well and make genuinely entertaining web novels but honestly at the moment I hate it because it has damaged the fanfic community overall. I reckon that may change as the tech matures but right now it's no replacement. Been reading this novel from day one love it even the cheese romance last chapter nothing wrong with a bit of cheese here and there. The use of ai here is fine in my book but yes the quality has dropped that's just straight up the consequence of using ai but it ain't terrible by any means.

They introduce themselves as shinigami no names. Then Rayleigh somehow knows gins name.

Never told his name somehow knows his name. Inconsistent from last chapter. If you're gonna use clanker tech, at least edit the slop properly