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SHINOBI
SHINOBILv131yr
2023-08-06 21:40

The novel is really good . Let it be characters( my fav is Amelia... she's so cute 🥺🥰) , world development.., etc.....But I feel like the pacing is really slow as it takes a lot of chapters for one event or the overall development of the plot to go through.... Thats the only downside. But don't let it get to you as the Author doesn't disappoints us with the content . It really is deserving to be in my one of the favourite novels.

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DevilDarkness
DevilDarknessAuthor

thnks buddy. you don't have to worry about pacing as that issue is resolved now. especially once the volume 2 came to an end. time skip happened an stuff started

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AshW0If
AshW0IfLv4

(Stoped reading after chapter 60) The book is boring, the author tries to make the Mc super edgy, the type that is like 'I am too lazy to deal with this because I lost someone I love' The Auther tries to add drama and dramatic reveals but he fails horribly it just becomes boring best example (spoiler) The mc learns that his sister the one he was being a edge lord about was there with him but without her memories, then his system tries to kill him because she was jealous and then it is revealed that mc has people living in his head, (This happens in the span of a chapter) Then there is the grammar, well let's just say thet it can be seen that the author is not a native english speaker and those mistakes kill my motivation to continue with the story.The author is Indian so the story has a lot of references to indian culture and religion. This does not bother me, but I would like to note it.Summery: The Mc is a depressed 'boo hoo'. I lost someone, and I know it was not my fault, but I still blame myself, and now i am haunted by her ghost and hear her voice in my head. [Highy unlikeable]The plot is all over the place.[It makes it seem that the author had no vision for the story, so he just wrote randomly]Random Drama that serves no purpose.[ Full of loop holes]Random Lore Drops [some chapters are some lore] ( I paid real money for a chapter, and it was just unimportant lore)2/5 Would not recommend the only reason it is not a 1 is because the world building is mildy interesting and the writing is not 'Young Master Chen: Courting Death' Terrible.

SugarApostle
SugarApostleLv13

Disclaimer: I am writing this review considering that this is the author's first novel. Like some other fans, I was also paid by the author to write a good review(just kidding😉)... 1. Writing quality:- So, considering this is the author's first novel, the writing quality is good. After catching on to the recent chapters I can conclude that the author is not good at describing the characters, but he is showing major improvements from the 1st chapter. 2. Story Development:- The way the author executed his ideas was amazing since this whole 'Getting Isekaid in a novel/game I read/played' is a recent uprising cliche, the author did a great job of adding extra elements to make this interesting. This was also the first time I read a 13-chapter prologue. 3. Character Design:- Unlike others, this author is focused more on chapter design than world-building which is welcomed change. The fact that the author put effort into writing a 13-chapter prologue gives depth to the mc. He did a great job in making the mc relatable and many others(including me) found the mc quite similar to us despite his messed-up past. He feels more real, his love for his family, and his struggles all feel real. Update Stability:- The author is very much consistent, you can expect 1 or 2 chapters per day. World background:- There is not much to say as the prologue was focused completely on the main character, and he just recently got transported to the novel world. In a second review(if this book crossed 150 chapters), I will write a detailed review of the world background. My personal opinion:- This book and its author both have tons of potential to be tapped into. If you are like me who loves watching an author improve as each chapter passes by then you will love this. A quote I like very much from this book:- "If you can't find someone you can trust, then look for someone you can control." As per our agreement, you gibe me moneh I gibe you a 5-star review. So you better appreciate me author🤣🤣. (First time I wrote a review of 2k words)

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