Review Detail of AidenUsmani in Marvel: The Journey

Why did you include that scene where are the MC said "no" to that wishes thing? I didn't read the fic yet, but I read the synopsis and I'm just wondering why? It serves no purpose at all.

If the MC knew about the marvel world then that decision just makes him look stupid, I mean I get the "I live for the thrills thing", but seriously it's the marvel universe he has to get how dangerous universe is right?

The MC doesn't trust TOAA. He doesn't want to get possessed by TOAA like how it did with Hulk. I was going to reveal this info later in the story but I have to explain since most of the readers don't get it.

I don't get why ppl have a problem. If mc doesn't ask for a system or wish for 17 wishes in one wish, he is great in my opinion.

People on this app tend to think of TOAA as the wisest and most forgiving character who would give away powers like it's nothing. But, that's false. TOAA itself said - "The MYSTERY intrigues me. I value the UNIQUE." When MC rejected his offer, he didn't "shoot himself in the foot", he instead drew more attention from TOAA. Since TOAA values "uniqueness", it would value him more. This was the "big brain moment" that MC did which most idiots fail to understand.

Just shows how much knowledge they have of the comics

this sounds interesting but before I read will there be any yuri not a fan?

Read the auxiliary chapter.

That's meant to be read from the story, bro. It's a condition for the MC's endeavor in Marvel verse. Though, it also left quite an interesting speculation for readers.

It is one of the best fanfic i have ever read , the reason why i like it is because of the reality of how things actually work , rather than just fantasy , and that take time to come up with . As for the decision regarding  no wishes, cheats etc , EXCELLENT. You dont know how much potential this story contain if you think that  he should  have gote some powers or cheat . You see the best work are those or those that people love most have built themselves bottom up. like we all love Superman but think for once of he had no weakness , sure he has extreme powers but as he got it without something he naturally has weakness but then look at goku , sure he had a minor boost at the beginning but he had to start at the bottom to a literal GOD ,  but does he have any weakness like Superman that can instantly turn hime into A Weak man who cant even stand properly NO and that's what i wish you dp to MC Dont give him powers without any struggle and hard work , That way he will have an amazing built up both in power and character. The rest is up to you but keep up the good work .

It's honestly hard to get something when it's not apparent or explicitly explained/obvious.🤷🏻‍♀️ But I get your side, the readers impatience and going all "I'll stop reading because of..." can get annoying. It's easier to keep reading and see if it gets revealed or explained later(which didn't happen yet because of the Grinding Arc(How I call the WWII before Captain America Arc) and the Capcicle Arc) like during his Grinding Arc because there was a good amount of monologue that could be used to explain this during his "The ways of power are unlimited" moment.

Initially, I had planned to introduce two key characters, Namor and the original Human Torch, in a chapter that provided background on the battle of Midway, which took place at sea. This chapter would have provided context for Namor's decision to join the war. In a similar vein, the Human Torch would have been introduced in a later chapter as a means of providing context for one of the war chapters, in which a scientist created the character to aid those affected by the war. Regrettably, much of the feedback I received from readers was negative and critical, with several expressing confusion regarding the story's protagonist's involvement and the 'useless' info dumps. As a result, I chose to abandon this storyline and rework the plot in a way that better aligns with the established Marvel Cinematic Universe, with certain modifications made to suit the story's needs.

The thing with Marvel is that it's huge and that's why most focus only on the MCU and not the whole Marvel Multiverse. With mutants and heroes you already have a lot of plot points that you can use but they also might influence how the story goes like changing one thing in Captain America could influence both Logan in the X-Men plot or even S.H.I.E.L.D. and all that but not changing anything is basically re-reading the canon plot + one more character that's the MC. Take how the WWII Mega Arc(Both the Grinding Arc and the Captain America Arc) after becoming influential and iconic the MC just disappeared when Captain America showed up. Completely making the MC's presence unimportant to the movie plot(making it canon+ one more character). What I was hoping to see after the MC had shown lots of personality and drive during the war campaign was: 1- MC gets Captain America treatment and becomes iconic or even gets a nickname like "God of War"(sorry for the cringy name idea) because he had the least casualties, the most kills, the most saves and all that before Captain America. People respected that. 2- After he threw the grenade at the field that Steve jumped at(canon plot I think but with someone else doing the grenade toss) he would be called to join the program or would have more screentime but no. He was just an extra to OG plot. 3- With Logan and his brother with the MC I hoped that they'd stay with the MC and not have Logan join Steve, or at least talk about him to Steve like the MC was a legend who Logan respected. But no, Logan shifted sides and that was that. 4- When Steve was recruiting I hoped he'd try and recruit the MC because he was well known and Steve would've known him from the grenade test. This would've lead to either him joining Steve and bringing the mutant brothers with him or him rejecting and saying something like "Your task is hydra, mine is everyone else. I know you'll do a good job just stick to your beliefs and never give up."(sorry for the cringe again) or something like that which would build up Steve's respect for MC even more and would go till the battle of New York if it still happened. 5- The most important thing would be distribution of the screentime between MC and other's POV showing that the MC still exists or what he's doing. But we didn't get that and just got the OG movie plot. Honestly it's a pain to make a fanfic, it's one of the reasons why I don't do it or have my drafts interrupted midway because you need to think not only about the immediate plot but the long term plot too. Like keeping the immediate plot interesting and engaging while also thinking about the consequences of said plot for long term stuff. So don't feel down, this is your first fanfiction and different from those who just read you are trying to make something yourself and that's awesome.

Calling people idiots for not getting your thought process is frankly ludicrous. People are not mind readers.

Hello, i have a question, your story based on mcu or comics?

I honestly like the story but I agree with many about the opinion that MC seems to be painted, I mean that once the Captain America arc arrives it seems that everyone forgets the MC and all that he had done and his accomplishments

I just wanna see MC being a "Master of All-Character" and being "Master of All- Himself". Like "Tetralogical Arts/Tetralogy & Absolute Transcendence & Omnipotence sub-powers (All from Superpowerwiki)" are kinda good for the type of MC as a technique/cultivation type arts (not the usual dantian thing but why not cultivate whole existence of the user/practitioner).

Because most peoples would accept a cheat in this situation, in fact most would beg for it, so seeing someone say 'ah, no need.' almost only happen in fiction.

Yeah, I watched the MCU movies but most of my 'knowledge' come from fanfics, never tried to read a comic.Never really was a thing where I lived qnd I didn't grow up in it.I would guess most peoples are like that too.

Me neither but that didn't stop me from googling stuff related to the superheroes or checking their fandom or official pages.