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Looks like the author is gonna be away for a couple of months and come back with a new account, a new story and a newish... writing style? So don't expect this novel to be completed... maybe? No hate to the author just please for God's sake finish your novels before starting a new one. Take all the time in the world to recover, but if you come back please don't come with a new novel and again please take your time to get better.πππ
the novel's extremely good, but I have one problem with the novel and, it's the fact that the mc faces no real problems and that's a problem with all the author's other novel too no real challenges. for example if something unexpected happens the mc either handles right away with no difficulty or just straight up don't care and another problem is the fact that every character in the novel is either extremely beautiful or extremely handsome the is no average looking characters in there are old looking characters in the novel but that's just some 1 billion year old guy that doesn't care about his looks but if the guy wants to he can also look extremely handsome if he wants. and that's in like every novel for the author but with all that said and done I still very much like the novel.
Writing Quality: The quality of the writing is some of the best on this site. Nothing to complain about here. Updating Stability: can't really say anything here Story Development: the story Development is ok it's not great, but no bad either. It a football novel, what I like about the novel is the fact the author describes the what goes on in the matches incredibly well. What I don't like is the fact thet it's a regressor type novel where he was a not so very good player and so he regrets a lot and the get s a second chance vai regression and he gets a system because ya know he's not good enough and so with the help of the system he's gonna be the GREATEST OF ALL TIME.π Character Design: absolutely atrocious bro I mean seriously all the characters feel like robots there is no character development for no character. world background: nothing to say ya know modern day earth I don't remember how good the description of the places are so I'm not going to say anything about the world background
"his hands are rated e for absolutely everyone." guess that's not true.
Please, bring this back please π₯Ί
What can I say, I like the novel I like the fact that the Mc is confident I like the R18 scenes doesn't feel flat at all. πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
One out of many things that bug me about these kinds of stories is the fact that in almost all the that I've read well, not almost in all the these kinds of stories the protagonists/sons of Heaven are always an idiot, horny or just straight up unlikeable. Why not make them likeable, then let your mc destroy/humiliate them kill or take there women to show the mc is not all talk?