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OukisLips
OukisLipsLv151yr
2023-03-11 01:19

This pretty good so far. The translator does a good job of editing the grammar, but there are still a lot of mistakes regarding the places, names and titles. The overall story is pretty good, but I think the original author wasted a lot of potential for character development by over-separating the transmigrator from Sam Tarly's original personality.

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Tortle121
Tortle121Author

Thanks bro… I'll watch out for names and places but titles are correct as author has kept authority level quite simple as KING, DUKE, and EARL ... lord will be only used sometimes just to show respect.. think of it as different timelines and will appreciate if you point any mistakes in future. PS- i think i should add note about titles in auxiliary volume.

Tortle121
Tortle121Author

And as for sam tarly development , i also agree , it would’ve been fun if he escaped from wall to outside wilderness and create a kingdom including giants or other magical aspects … or direct survival against white walkers .. but I’m also curious as where the authors gonna take him in this story.✌️

Sagvey_Ay
Sagvey_AyLv2

using the knowledge of the future (soap, perfume,chocolate,vodka,paint,glass,silk,spices,sauce,new farm systems,various trades,new shipbuilding,architecture for the capital,) special soldiers,spies and assassins for the future army, if he really wants to rule the world and have fun instead of drama, he needs

Tortle121:Thanks bro… I'll watch out for names and places but titles are correct as author has kept authority level quite simple as KING, DUKE, and EARL ... lord will be only used sometimes just to show respect.. think of it as different timelines and will appreciate if you point any mistakes in future. PS- i think i should add note about titles in auxiliary volume.
Sagvey_Ay
Sagvey_AyLv2

using the knowledge of the future (soap, perfume,chocolate,vodka,paint,glass,silk,spices,sauce,new farm systems,various trades,new shipbuilding,architecture for the capital,) special soldiers,spies and assassins for the future army, if he really wants to rule the world and have fun instead of drama, he needs

Tortle121:And as for sam tarly development , i also agree , it would’ve been fun if he escaped from wall to outside wilderness and create a kingdom including giants or other magical aspects … or direct survival against white walkers .. but I’m also curious as where the authors gonna take him in this story.✌️
Tortle121
Tortle121Author

These might come in future or not as normal people don't have knowledge to create these things but currently he's just trying to establish himself as it's a medieval society and without power or authority if he creates some game breaking thing .. others will directly swallow him ✌️ Oh .. little spoiler : he will make Rum soon👍

Sagvey_Ay:using the knowledge of the future (soap, perfume,chocolate,vodka,paint,glass,silk,spices,sauce,new farm systems,various trades,new shipbuilding,architecture for the capital,) special soldiers,spies and assassins for the future army, if he really wants to rule the world and have fun instead of drama, he needs
Sagvey_Ay
Sagvey_AyLv2

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Tortle121:These might come in future or not as normal people don't have knowledge to create these things but currently he's just trying to establish himself as it's a medieval society and without power or authority if he creates some game breaking thing .. others will directly swallow him ✌️ Oh .. little spoiler : he will make Rum soon👍
Sagvey_Ay
Sagvey_AyLv2

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Tortle121:And as for sam tarly development , i also agree , it would’ve been fun if he escaped from wall to outside wilderness and create a kingdom including giants or other magical aspects … or direct survival against white walkers .. but I’m also curious as where the authors gonna take him in this story.✌️
OukisLips
OukisLipsLv15

Thanks for continuing the translation. I liked it so much I decided to read the unedited MTL in the link you sent... up until Ch 188, when the MTL starts to become completely unintelligible. You've got your work cut out for you on that one

Tortle121:Thanks bro… I'll watch out for names and places but titles are correct as author has kept authority level quite simple as KING, DUKE, and EARL ... lord will be only used sometimes just to show respect.. think of it as different timelines and will appreciate if you point any mistakes in future. PS- i think i should add note about titles in auxiliary volume.
Tortle121
Tortle121Author

OukisLips:Thanks for continuing the translation. I liked it so much I decided to read the unedited MTL in the link you sent... up until Ch 188, when the MTL starts to become completely unintelligible. You've got your work cut out for you on that one
Tortle121
Tortle121Author

OukisLips:Thanks for continuing the translation. I liked it so much I decided to read the unedited MTL in the link you sent... up until Ch 188, when the MTL starts to become completely unintelligible. You've got your work cut out for you on that one
shashank_bhatt
shashank_bhattLv14

?? Do you know who is the love interest? Or is there more than one love interest

Tortle121:These might come in future or not as normal people don't have knowledge to create these things but currently he's just trying to establish himself as it's a medieval society and without power or authority if he creates some game breaking thing .. others will directly swallow him ✌️ Oh .. little spoiler : he will make Rum soon👍
Tortle121
Tortle121Author

I don’t know brother … but according to vibes … Margaery might be love interest

shashank_bhatt:?? Do you know who is the love interest? Or is there more than one love interest
Kevin_0062
Kevin_0062Lv1

Hola cuál es el mtl original??

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