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Zero_Requiem_2490
Zero_Requiem_2490Lv21yr
2023-06-22 02:16

Great Character Psychology and butterfly efect. Updates almost daily and when not, it compensates it with mass release. And there is no overpowered system that makes him invincible (it only quantifies his real stats), its all witts, charisma and physical strength.

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Tortle121
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Thanks for the review bro .. really appreciate it 🤩🤩

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