Item: Supernatural: The Great Hunter System
Rating: 4.2
Author: YoureABum

YoureABumLv11yr

2023-05-21 22:23

the story is decent but you really don't know what kind of MC you are dealing with. hes made good choices, stupid ones, and questionable ones. he seems to be a bit of a slave to the system as well sometimes and it reflects in the choices he makes. I feel like he's headed toward the cliche morally ambiguous MC that's been extra popular on this app. problem is a story without a framework and without boundaries usually starts losing its steam after losing its mystery. Story is predictably unpredictable, usually by adding a twist at the end up chapters by leaving readers out of the MCs thought process when he makes certain choices earlier in the story. seems like a cheap writing trick but just writing is impressive in its own right. Story is still pretty new so my review might change later. Story is overall pretty good and id suggest giving it a read before judging it.

Supernatural: The Great Hunter System

Millan_Grimm

4.1

194 Chs

Liked by 10 people

Replies2

DetachedDreamerLv14

you were right! definitely lost its steam fast.

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JustTiredOfPickingLv11

yeah, it was kinda all over the place...

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Welcome back Bro. I was waiting for an update. Hope you can finish this book [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]

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I'm just making it 10...XD 4|4|4|4|5 (cough... I'm a bit partial because there weren't many supernatural fics lately...longer ones at least) I read this a while back, it got kinda mid. Also, I thought it was dropped. i might change the review after rereading it...

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epic start bro keep it going................

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personaly not a fan of changing the pow every couple lines, it makes the story feel super slow , other than that abit unneeded details like pow from the maid and his sister this just made me skip alot of dialogs. not realy a fan of this writeting where 70% of the chapters dialog is from a side character ,only readed 10chap hope it changes somwhat. otherwise very desent

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It's great to see another supernatural writer,I have my own supernatural FanFiction but it's a bit low,I started following yours recently and I hope I can get some inspiration from it,thank you very much......❤️❤️

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nah man you have really got to never give up on this book,,,, it's a work of pure genius I love it,,,,hey now you gotta promise you'll finish it or else🫵🏾,,,,keep up the good work

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