Rating may change but as of now it is almost at the stage where it was a waste of time reading. The author for some idiotic reason forces Vista to show up where the MC was and mane handled him. Vista’s POV has him thinking he is the MCs ”sensei” but then he almost crippled his left arm and cuts off two of his fingers. Just to clarify... A SWORDSMAN that was “training” another SWORDSMAN by cutting off his fingers. Mihawk lost interest in his duels with shanks because of his arm and he also only gave Zoro a massive scar on his chest. Vista lowered the MCs max fighting potential and it was forced and pointless. Also, the very next chapter he calls Vista back up just to start selling him devil fruits and future swords that he “finds”.… MC became pathetic. He should be selling to Whitebeard rivals and other tops sword users. Unfortunately, he is a b-tch.
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LIKEYeah rating will not be changing at this time because he still is has two fingers cut off. That 1 chapter was so forced and ruined the story.
Not gonna lie, straight busted out laughing when I read this. Potential readers plz don't let this review dissuade you from checking it out.
Why don’t you read all of the other comments on that trash chapter then lol I am not the only one. Nothing in my review is wrong since he is a swordsman with missing fingers so his max potential is less, Mihawk didn’t even do that to Zoro during their first meeting, Mihawk lost interest in dueling with shanks because of lost a limb lol so go on and try and explain how that chapter was good for your story. It was awful and ruined the story. He is still in contact with Vista and selling him devil fruits & graded swords. The same dude that cut off his fingers and lowered his max potential.
Last thing sorry, my views and power stones literally doubled after that chapter. Went from around 200ish power stones a week to around 4-500. I doubt the chapter ruined the story…. Could be wrong though, obviously I’m biased though 🤷
Nah it made no sense for Vista to “train” the MC by cutting off his fingers and crippling his max potential. The entire chapter was forced so if you like the stories with a forced encounter that makes no sense and the MC getting nerfed… then sure this story is definitely for you lol he became Vista’s errand boy and does nothing against him after he lowered his max potential.
yikes dude this author used a sub account to comment
I agree with author, you should read all chapters. This fanfiction is well worth the time. Although I would like the grade of the sword to be written in Japanese, because sometimes it is not entirely clear what level of the sword it is.
Favorite comment, caught me using the KD inspired burner acc.
